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Old 03-06-2010, 08:28 AM

Ah you're here! You're here!

As you can see from my avatar, i've just got my goldy locks to the site of Menewsha, but, we all have to start from somewhere. So, just to entertain you, my sweet fellow-mees, i decided to submit this poem i made at school. I had to translate it to english, so it has kinda lost its rhymes, but i hope you can still find it enjoyable <3

A white salmon was swimming in a pond ,

Its eyebrows were in a murky frown ,

"Yesterday i found a skull from the river" ,

It said and threw up a hairball

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so, did you like it? ;) could you feel the sensuality?

Comments, please!

 



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