GD, i need ideas on how to cut my hair.... and to know if my parody of Last Resort by Papa Roach is good...

Parody::
Me and my friend made a parody of Last Resort by Papa Roach, give me feedback to it...

Cut my wife into pieces
She stole my last poptart
It was Chocolate with Sprinkles
Wouldn't give a f*** if it was blueberry


It was my last poptart


Cut my wife into pieces.
It was my last poptart
Chocolate,
Not Strawberry.
Don't give a f*** if it was blueberry.

Cut this poptart into pieces
I'm on my last poptart, Chocolate no kiddin
Couldn't care less if you want it
Don't you even care That you already had 7

Would it be wrong or would it be right
If I took you out tonight
Chances are That I might

Cutting you down tonight
I'm giving the Warning, Right?

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine

I never thought you would try for it
To have was to late as you emptied the tin
Hurried you stuffed it within
Tendons, or muscles where to begin

It all started with the Toaster
The bitch went and ate the other
Trying to get a poptart from the higher shelf
only finding nothing but crumbs left

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine


Nothing alright
Nothing is Fine
I'm out of Chocolate

I'm out of Chocolate


I'm out of Chocolate

Chocolate

I can't go on letting you live

Cut my wife into pieces
She stole my last poptart
It was Chocolate with Sprinkles
Don't give a f*** if it was blueberry


It was my last poptart


Cut my wife into pieces.
It was my last poptart
Chocolate,
Not Strawberry.
Don't give a f*** if it was blueberry


Would it be wrong or would it be right
If I took you out tonight
Chances are That I might

Cutting you down tonight
I'm giving the Warning, Right?

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine

I'm losing my sight
Losing my Mind
Bitch took that last poptart of mine

Nothing alright
Nothing is Fine
I'm out of Chocolate



I Can't Buy More

There are none in the Store

I'm Crying

I CAn't go On Hope they let me Off

Can't go on

With out Breakfast

Good Hair Ideas (get 1g for getting put here)::





Ps... my appointment form my hair is 3:00 pm, 3/10/10

Is there a picture of you with your hair down naturally we could see? (I believe I've already given you my opinion on your parody. =D )

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Originally Posted by xXDemeter127Xx

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umm, you have to put the picture settings on as "public" so we can view it ^.^

and as for the poem, there's a ton of swear words in there o.o but the plot and idea's good. I think there's a bit too much separation in the lines at some parts of the poem :d

I LOL'd with the first two lines. I think it's wonderful. I can't really give you any ideas for your hair though without a picture..

Originally Posted by LaVida

umm, you have to put the picture settings on as "public" so we can view it ^.^

and as for the poem, there's a ton of swear words in there o.o but the plot and idea's good. I think there's a bit too much separation in the lines at some parts of the poem :d

its not a poem... its a parody to Last Resort by Papa Roach.

Originally Posted by xXDemeter127Xx

its not a poem... its a parody to Last Resort by Papa Roach.

I'm sure she realizes that (maybe not who knows..), but song lyrics are really no different than a poem.

you could just leave your hair as it is

Dude!!! OMG!!! I love your parody!!!