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07-24-2012, 04:17 AM
So I'm not sure if this counts as an item or not, but the really, really pink lips look out of place with the gold, reds, and greens of the avi. Beyound that I love it.
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07-24-2012, 04:51 PM
I'd have to say lose the fire in the hand. You just have too much going on in a single place on the avi. I do really like what you've done with your head.
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07-25-2012, 02:15 AM
Love it, don't change a thing.
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07-27-2012, 04:06 AM
I'd say get rid of your current shoes and find another pair.. A more silver pair~
And also get rid of the black belt thing.. I don't think black goes all that well with gold and silver.
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07-27-2012, 04:20 AM
I would mute the yellow in the hair just a tiny bit. It just seems too bright otherwise.
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07-28-2012, 05:14 PM
I would change the color of the hair, it blends in to much for me... It's hard to notice the face, maybe make it a shade darker or maybe even brighter?
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07-31-2012, 06:23 PM
Maybe add the Yumeh Slippers or Halo to complete the look? :P
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07-31-2012, 08:20 PM
Don't change a thing. It looks perfect.
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08-01-2012, 10:01 PM
Don't change a thing sir.
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08-03-2012, 06:38 PM
Don't change a thing.
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08-09-2012, 10:10 AM
add the silver shamrock skirt.
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and something silver for your shoulders.....
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and some black on your feet.... not socks though... what about the black and silver isis slippers?
ok ill stop...
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08-09-2012, 10:29 PM
Don't change a thing baby.
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08-13-2012, 04:18 PM
Don't change anything. 
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08-13-2012, 10:38 PM
wow I love it. it looks really cool. don't change a thing. <3
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08-13-2012, 10:42 PM
Looks trick or treaty. Don't change a thaaang.
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08-14-2012, 05:28 AM
It makes no sense to me. You need to de-clutter and create theme/story
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Aoi Kazuya
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08-15-2012, 10:24 PM
scrolling down the page, i honestly can say that McNugget's Slenderman made me jump. I've been spending too much time around horror themed stuff >.>
Kirin's avi is beautiful the way it is :D
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08-16-2012, 01:05 AM
It needs a beach background, at least for me it seems very beachy.
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08-23-2012, 07:48 PM
absolutely perfect. dont change ^.^
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08-23-2012, 08:29 PM
Sorry for sandwich posting but don't change a thing.
For the person below me I'm going for a dapper fox. Any suggestions would be appreciated.
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08-27-2012, 12:35 AM
Don't change a thing since anything else would throw it off.
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08-27-2012, 01:42 PM
Don't change a thing.
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08-27-2012, 03:24 PM
maybe i would add some tattoos in your face :o than your face wouldnt look so nude against your body ^^
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08-27-2012, 09:04 PM
Maybe add a background, or at least some purple around your head.
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08-27-2012, 09:08 PM
Change nothing dear.
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