maybe short pink socks to layer on the blue ones.

Lose the hair puffs, maybe replace them with the red rose pose from the romance isn't dead hairpin instead.

I'm not so wild about the hair, but I know there isn't much else you can do

I think you need socks of some type.. maybe the white fishnets would work better than just white stockings..

I love that corset and skirt combination... I just think you need some pink socks or black socks and pink shoes. :)

Don't change a thing, it looks great

give it a little more pop, maybe accent that silver on your belt to give it a third color. :)

I feel like maybe you could use just a tiny touch more gold, possibly near the neck or shoulders if that's possible? Otherwise it looks awesome!

i think you are good, don't change a thing Ms. Bright.

I like it, but something isn't right with the legs. Maybe make the purple tights shorter, and have gold ones underneath?

The hair colour is off, but otherwise is very nice.

maybe try black to match better?

Uhhh...Put some clothes on? :D

oooh this one looks very nice mobsy, maybe make the hair-do a little shorter because right now it looks like its cutting off some of the white on that ear, and you need white on your head.

My only advice is what I said in the 1 Good 1 Harsh thread, you want to swap the skirt for one the same colour as your hair.

Ditch the drink for an umbrella or a cane

Honestly-- I like where you're going, but-- your avatar looks incomplete. Try adding some assessories.

I really like it, but it seems a little cluttered, you need to lose something, but I'm not sure what.

i really don't care for that color, but i suggest some tights and maybe that black shrug to cover some of your shoulder

Ditch the big purple ribbon, you don't need it

Hm... maybe some elegant long gloves would work?

Add- A white belt! <3

Add; some more gold hints. I wish there could be some on the legs but it's probably not possible. Also maybe a hairpin or something.

Don't change a thing.

Dont change a thing ^^
I like it :D

You still have black rimmed eyes... which looks odd. Is there a way to change that?