
04-21-2010, 07:14 PM
This is a new thread, The Read and Rate! Here are two original poems that I have written. Read it and leave a comment! :D Comments of all kinds, from flames to praise, are welcome here! Please don't bash the work, or other people's comments! Let's keep it nice and friendly, shall we?
Emotionless
You broke me like a piece of glass,
My heart shattered on the floor.
The pain I fell is worse than any cut,
Bleeding slowly like honey.
It hurts so much…and you care so little.
I see no remorse in your eyes,
As you just stand there emotionless.
A heart that is so cold in your chest,
To do what you did to me.
Why are you so cold?
Iced over just like the realities of the world.
How do you feel?
Can you feel anything at all?
Rainbow Haiku
Rainbow.
Vibrant colors in the sky.
Joy.
*No copy and pasting! D:< It makes writers angry.!*
|