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Fallacy of a Nobody
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Old 05-13-2010, 08:10 AM

Alright, all my poetry will be in italics. Most of my poetry will be about stuff going on in my life. I also don't know how often I'll update, but feel free to critic. Just no flames. Poems will also be varying in length, from haikus to one stanza to multiples.


A memory crosses my mind of a happier time
Smiles and laughter, melodies sung in my ear
Yet the memory fades and darkness follows
Bitter tears flowing, feeding the despair inside.

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Old 05-18-2010, 01:50 AM

Love the image you paint. The reader can really relate to topic, all of us have had/going through something similar.

 


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