still!

I just finished mine.

you like it?

I'm out of ideas for today.

I do!

just write a conclusion and call it done?

yay! it makes me ridiculously happily that it exists!

I need to write a couple more paragraphs before that. I only got a little bit on page 7 so far and it needs to be on page 8.

that it exists is a glorious thing. makes me anxious and excited to be more art though.

ah okay. yeah can't just write a conclusion then. just a page long paragraph....

haha yeah. I really want someone to draw Jarred and Derek's first kiss too.

I like to make lots of little paragraphs because it makes the paper longer.

me too! though I'm scared of what interpretations people might draw from that scene.

i don't know what 'little' paragraph is. my paragraphs at shortest are usually half a page to three quarters of a page

haha. could be scary i guess yeah. but that scene was kinda wildly out of control.

the shortest a paragraph can be and still be a paragraph. three long sentences. But most of my paragraphs are 6 or 7 lines long. I only make a couple real short ones.

yeah no. my writing style just does not work for that. at all.

no comment to the rp thing. whatsoever?

3-4 paragraphs a page works. I like to split the idea up some.

sorry, I didn't even look at it. now I find I don't know what to say to it. just...I agree.

ugh no. just no. I tell students at the writing center not to do that shit.

haha. it's kinda funny cuz like I'd hoped it'd end up kinda like that but i don't think I expected it to be like that at all

My idea goes on a tangent though. feels like a new idea.

I have about the same reaction. I never put a picture in my head of how it would go, but something like that. Still kinda shocked me though.

i'm really good about making my tangents related to the main point.

Yeah. It shocked me I think because of how aggressive it got.

Well, I didn't know my main point until page 6. I wasn't planning on having something to tie all the things together.

oh, the aggressive part is what I imagined. The kiss was something I never thought of though. Everything is aggressive in my imaginings with Jarred whether he's being dominate or not. Always one extreme or the other.

haha. well that's when you go back, change your thesis and add sporadic tidbits throughout to make it make sense.

I expected slightly aggressive and i expected kissing, I knew Derek would somehow get there.

I plan to do that. hopefully that will also make it longer. I mean, I realized I was actually writing to this point most of the time, but I didn't realize I was writing it until I started talking about laissez-faire.

me and my dyslexic reading. Derek=Declan. lol....
I think, I've come to realize that Jarred is meant to be a true freak. the moments of getting slammed against a wall, or starting something aggressive, and the punch that comes from it...these are the things I imagine because those are the moments that matter to him.

haha nice. I have to do that with all my papers, usually with some paragraph shuffling as well

I do that all the time.
these two are going to be so weird.
Did we accidentally create BDSM characters?

I hope I don't have to shuffle anything. That's more hassle than I want to deal with.

glad it's not just me.
I feel like we did...And that would please me actually because I love that shit.

I basically shuffled my entire linguistics paper.

This will be so much fun to write. Like not intentional but so much fun
and no, i definitely started feeling inklings of it with the wall scene and then most definitely with the most recent exchange

that sucks.

yeah, fun is the word!
Oh me...I saw it coming way before that. I remember really really wanting that wall scene to happen. But I didn't think it would get this bad.

haha. Derek at the beginning of this rp was generic enough to have gone fluff route of declan and koda or the route that jarred and derek are actually taking. I'm glad it went the complete opposite direction

fluff would have been weird. I can't imagine Derek and fluff.

yeah, he quickly went away from fluff.
god, i wonder if these two are ever actually going to even like each other

they'll like each other in their own way. It'll be special, but it will be. I have faith that we can make any couple work.

yep. we'll just have to see where it goes....

I'm thinking we might make some real progress with Gary and Willia soon