View Poll Results: Yaoi?
YESHH! 41 38.32%
EW NAW! 1 0.93%
mmmmm baby ;] 21 19.63%
*fangirl squeel* 35 32.71%
Yaoi?whats yaoi? (please ask ;]) 3 2.80%
Poll whore ;D 6 5.61%
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Old 05-27-2010, 05:02 AM

the first Kingdom hearts is the only videogame i have ever beaten.. EVER
anyways g2g for a bit time to walk home XD i shall be back on in about 40 minutes


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:02 AM

@alexa: see you later.

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I know what I want to happen and how to happen, I'm just having a hard time getting myself to write it.
This is why I don't write very often. >.>;;


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:03 AM

@alexa
Hope to see you when you get back. I'll be here until dawn!


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:04 AM

@Sho:
Haha, I'm glad I'm not the only one in this dilemma. XD


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:06 AM

@ sora: Ha ha. I spend a ton of time thinking about my story ideas. I mean, I was at work for hours and was lost in my imagination the entire time. But when it comes down to actually writing, it suddenly gets hard. >.<


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#681
Old 05-27-2010, 05:10 AM

Yeah, I know how you feel. xD
I wish I wasn't lazy with writing fan-fiction like in the days I first started writing it.


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:11 AM

Have you ever participated in NaNoWriMo by chance? It always helps me get some writing done.


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:12 AM

Would any of you be willing to read over the first part of the first chapter of one of my fics? All my friends are completely useless.


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:13 AM

You looking for critique? I could give you a read over if you'd like.


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:14 AM

A critique would be great. The only thing my friends have to say is that they want more.

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Old 05-27-2010, 05:16 AM

K. I'll try to be helpful then! :)


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:19 AM

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Have you ever participated in NaNoWriMo by chance? It always helps me get some writing done.
I signed up for that awhile back, but never have jumped in and done anything with it yet. :sweat:


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:21 AM

You should try it this coming November. I've found that the need to get 50,000 in only thirty days let's me get my story down on paper without too much thought. Once it's there I can go back and make it all neat and pretty. It helps me get past the boring parts that always get me stuck. XD


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:27 AM

Bah I have one scene in my head. I don't know what to do about it >.< Should it be a flashback or perhaps a scene in the middle or make my story sad and make it the end. Well apparently this scene doesn't want to be sad. It wants to be waffy >.< Silly story with its own ideas


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#690
Old 05-27-2010, 05:33 AM

Chibes: Stories always have their own ideas. That's why I've been working on the same three stories for at least five years, one of them is up to ten years and they haven't gone anywhere. Just keep changing. >.<

@sora: I finished reading your chapter. I thought it was very nicely written. I think it was just a tad slow in the beginning when you dumped all of the character backgrounds in at once. It might have been better to bring up this information as Vincent interacted with them instead of all at once. Other than that I think it's coming along nicely. Your detail is great and your pacing is good. I only wish I had played dirge of cerberus so I would know a little more about what's going on! XD


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:38 AM

Thanks for the honest feedback. I guess I'll work on the opening some more before continuing with the chapter. I'm eventually going to post it on adultfanfiction.net, but not until I have at least the first five chapters finished. Just that little bit has taken me almost two months to write..... granted, of course, that I had finals last month.


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#692
Old 05-27-2010, 05:40 AM

Lol I have 22 stories on FFN and 13 of those are not completed. >.<

The stories speak I write. And I have 3 (including this yaoi cuteness) not posted that are in the works as we speak.


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:40 AM

Not a problem, I enjoyed it! :)

Two months! :0 Well hopefully now you're on your summer vacation and you can get some writing done!

@ chibes: wow that is a lot of stories. My stories aren't fanfiction though, so I guess that thing slowing me down is coming up with all the characters and the background of the world and everything. I just can't decided on some of this stuff.


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#694
Old 05-27-2010, 05:40 AM

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#695
Old 05-27-2010, 05:41 AM

Welcome back Alexa ^^


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:42 AM

Welcome back Alexa!


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#697
Old 05-27-2010, 05:43 AM

thanks ^_^
i tend to do one-shots.. im attempting to do a multi-chaptered story for a comic me and a friend are working on but i havent worked on it in about a year XD


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:44 AM

@ Alexa: yeesh, that's a long time to not be working on something. Thought I've kinda done the same thing. I contemplate my stories, but I don't actually write. Maybe I should go do that...write some drabbles.


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:51 AM

I've been focused on my art as opposed to my writing -_-'
i've done a few drabbles here and there but nothing finished


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Old 05-27-2010, 05:54 AM

That why you're doing the free sketches? To get some more practice in?

I've been focused on comicing lately. Doesn't give me much time for drawing (other stuff) or writing.

I wish I didn't have to go to work or school, than I could spend all my time working on these. Except, I would probably end up wasting all that time on video games and then internet. XD


 

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