Love and love,
Do always hide deep within acove,
And always shove me out of the picture,
Out of their warmth,
While, they breed,
And never giving me a glance,
Not even giving me a pup,
Leaving me alone,
To die in the cold,
While love escapes my last breath,
For those whom are love,
Are just people in love, and have love, and are loved.......
That refuse to share their love with me.......
Oh, how heart broken i am......
And heart-broken I am when I die.....
Oh, bye...........

Please tell me how this is!!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!

Sounds confused and jumbled, but that may just be me.


Also, poems belong in the literature forums. This is for art critiques.

yea but still i like it... it's ... just so... sorrowful!!! ToT *sniffles*