Lock's eyes widened. "Serenity!" He rushed over to her. "Oi, wake up, whats wrong." He a said, shaking her gently. He made sure his hood was creating a shadow over his face. Did I blow it again?....he thought.

Serenity was sleeping and the black roses are around her and she had a black rose in her hand and she was cute when she sleeps. Serenity neck was showing and her blood is rare and juicy as well.

Lock sat down and crossed his legs. Keeping the shadow on his face, he stared at Serenity. He couldn't figure out why she had taken a liking to him. He held himself back once again from biting her. He picked up a black rose, wondering what could do all this, and why wasn't it affecting him?

Serenity was still asleep and she is cute when she sleeps and she is a beautiful girl as well. Serenity wakes up and rubs her eyes and looks at him "hello are you alright oh it must be the sun I am sorry I see you hate me I should go now."

(your sentence structure is a bit off XD)
Leaf completely ignored her comment. "Thank the gods you're alright." He said, hugging her as soon as he saw she was awake.

Serenity looks at him and was in shock as well "are you alright you seem weird Lock?" Serenity looks at him and feels that she can't move.

(oops, I put leaf instead of lock XD. Leaf's another character I made)
Lock held Serenity at arms length. "No, everything's alright." He said from the shadow under his hood. "You think we can go someplace with a little less...sunlight?" He asked.

Serenity looks at him and nodded and got up and smiled at him and grabbed his hand and took him under the trees and found a cave and was like a home to her. Serenity and Lock got to the cave and went to a room and was dark and let go of his hand "here you go no one knows about this place I made this room a vampire place cause I love vampires I guess you think I am weird now?"

Lock pulled down his hood and stared in awe at the cave. "You made this?" He asked, stepping forward a couple steps. "Why? And how?"

Serenity looks at him and smiles "I am an angel princess and it wasn't hard I made this about a year ago and no vampires knows about it just an angel that is me well now you know you can stay here long as you want of course." Serenity gets on the bed and lays on the bed.

Lock looked at her. "You're very odd." He said with a chuckle, sitting in a chair next to serenity. He couldn't figure out why she liked him.

Serenity looks at him and smiles "I have a question if you think I am weird than why you stay with me you like me or something Lock?" Serenity looks at him still.

Lock chuckled a little. "No such thing as normal." He said, his blue eyes staring at her through his bangs. He blushed a little. No one had been that nice to him. Even in his years of serving in the vampire empire, he was still treated horribly. It's the vampire king that holds the power, not the prince.

Serenity looked at him and got up and went to him and out her hand on his cheek and smiled at whispered to him and said "do you love me Lock if you do I love you."

Lock looked down. In the vampire world, it took thousands of years for a vampire to find love, partially because vampires are usually a very unforgiving species. However, his feelings toward this girl, this angel that appeared out of the blue, who he only met yesterday. He made a decision in his head, one that would effect his life and the life of every vampire and angel in existence. Without answering, he leaned forward, and kissed Serenity.

Serenity looked at him and blushed a lot and put her arms around his neck and kissed him back she was in love with him but in her life she would be hated by her kind but if that is the case for her to be in love with a vampire she would do it for him.

Lock held her in his arms. It felt good, it felt right. In that very moment, he vowed in his head to protect her no matter what. "So," he asked. "What now?"

Serenity looked at him and thinks of something and blushed "well you want to make it it is just a thought if you don't like it just tell me alright."

Lock was confused. "Make what?"

"it is a a kissing thing you can do for hours and hours."

Lock blushed. "Y-you mean, make out?"

Serenity looks at him and smiles "well yea you know that means and you want to try it?"

"Um.." This was a bit awkward for Lock. "Ok." He said quietly, blushing madly.

Serenity smiles and hugged him tight and didn't want to let go as well.

Even though she had just suggested they kiss for hours, he held her tight.