
12-22-2010, 07:09 PM
please tell me wat u think about my poems
(un-named)
Dressed in Black
Covered in White
Drowned in Forever
Seen in Theory
Knows in Sight
Cry in happiness
Laughs in Sorrow
. . . but forever in Mind
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(Falling)
what's the point of falling
when it's hard to get up
the reason why you won't fall
you won't give yourself the chance to
you stay down
on the road to a painful death
a death that the naked-eye cannot see
no one will ever build up
the courge to help
help so you can get up
off the floor
which is starting to seem
like a grave to you
but who would truly care
the bruses,the marks
that they see upon you
seems like a part of a book
where they do not turn the page
but here, in reality they just ignor
the pain- striken emotions on your face
as if it was a page in a book
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~only wrote 2 poems if u guys lyk them i might write more of my poems on here~
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