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05-20-2011, 01:02 AM
I really like the color scheme, and the mermaid theme is pretty cool. I really like the eyes too, though personally, I think they look a bit out of place on this particular avatar. But love it all the same! 9/10
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Linnea
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05-20-2011, 02:36 AM
oh my gosh! your hair matches those wings perfectly! it's a little bare, but i think that is the point... and i like the theme! kind of hardcore and soft at the same time :yes: 8/10
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05-20-2011, 12:05 PM
9/10
it looks great but it needs white stockings.
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McNugget
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05-20-2011, 02:11 PM
9.6/10 very nice colours,and great balance :yes:
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05-20-2011, 04:35 PM
I admire you for incorporating the bugs (I'm still trying to figure out ways of bringing them in to my own avis)
You're colors match and balance is great
10/10 for a stunning avi
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bloodstainedwings
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05-20-2011, 05:10 PM
i like it i just think the red could be balanced out a lot more. red eyes would help a lot. as would a red necklace of some sort. i also think you could use a green hat and something brown on your shoulders more then just the arrows. but its a great start and a wonderful theme. i really like the green and brown. its a very smooth avatar.
7/10
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chronic_heartbreak14
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05-21-2011, 12:16 AM
really brown. but as for color distribution i find no fault. it seems a little... too large for words XD but the skirt does look odd, the avatar doesn't get big until that skirt comes into play. 9/10 from me
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05-21-2011, 02:17 AM
7/10
BRIGHT but FABULOUS. I don't like the use of the set, hat and corset. I'd say get a bit more creative with the use of items, and it'd be perfect.
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05-21-2011, 04:59 PM
8 // 10
I really like this. Interesting color scheme and layering, especially the head area. However, the layers for the body are a lot simpler than the head's. Try using shorter items and adding more visible layers. If not, I don't know what you can change besides adding a hand item and maybe some earrings.
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05-21-2011, 05:34 PM
i feel like the green is a main color anywhere except the waist, where its an accent color. the hair might get a little darker, just to match the bottom of the dress, the cinch, and shoes. i think it's very well put together and really nice looking! 8.7/10
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Enzeru
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05-21-2011, 05:46 PM
8/10 neck area feels empty and the eyes don't match.
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05-21-2011, 08:18 PM
10/10. It's a great Cosplay!
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bloodstainedwings
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05-21-2011, 08:27 PM
i really really like it but it needs work being balanced. there is no black at your feet and with all the layering on the top there is non on the bottom making it very top heavy. i suggest changing the skirt entirely so that your using sea green stockings and then black socks over top. adding gold anklets for balance. you also would need some more of the orchid colour, and i suggest trying to layer the kimono shoes with the boots you have on currently.
hope that helps.
7/10
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05-21-2011, 11:00 PM
Everything is placed almost perfectly. It's hard for me to do my usual rate on this avatar because it's so... so like something I would do myself. Though, you do need shoes, and maybe something to break up the green and blue socks on the legs. Maybe you could even take off the goggles, if that wouldn't disrupt this perfect balance here.
9.5 / 10 (That's a rather high rate from me.)
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05-22-2011, 01:31 AM
checking for color distribution, check. checking for theme, not sure. XD
i think all the colors on it make wonderful, maybe stick the black arm thing on the other arm too. :3
its a 10/10 from me, can't find anything wrong with it
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Mizayo
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05-22-2011, 04:26 AM
I like the colors, and how you've made them all fit together nicely. They're very well evened throughout the avatar, and most of them are the right tints. I like everything, except the eyes seem a little dull compared to the rest of the bright colors (for me, anyway). Maybe you could make them a brighter green or something? 9/10
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Fiona_Watergate
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05-22-2011, 04:31 PM
I love the colors and the trapped look, as if you were a slave to someone. I love how you got the hair just right as well. 9/10
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05-22-2011, 04:59 PM
9/10 Both the moon and arch is a bit too much gold.
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05-22-2011, 10:10 PM
gorgeous! i kind of wish the purple was on your avatar, but really just leave it off. it looks great as is, color distribution is terrific and so is the theme. 10/10
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Dillo
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05-23-2011, 05:55 PM
7/10 Three different shades of pink. Overall though its cute!
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Linnea
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05-23-2011, 05:57 PM
@chronic: a really interesting color scheme and choice of items... you sort of remind me of candy or a christmas elf... i think you need maybe the short black socks since there isn't any black by your feet and the the background doesn't really fit with the overall theme... the hair is also a little too bright, but i know how hard it is to work with the color wheel thingy... great job so far though 7/10 from me!
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nice use of the cape, i don't see it get used very often... i like the bats and spider, and they seem to fit with the theme... it's a little sparse though... and the purples are all a little different... nice start though :yes: 6/10
Last edited by Linnea; 05-23-2011 at 06:07 PM..
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McNugget
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05-23-2011, 07:20 PM
10/10 This avatar is perfect. And Ilike it quite much. Good balance, and nice use of colours. :XD
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05-24-2011, 03:03 PM
I love this outfit, it's like a god or crazy inventor <3, though the beard makes me laugh every time :3 10/10
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say-i-love-you
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05-24-2011, 05:03 PM
I like your color combo and you've balanced out the colors nicely but there doesn't seem to be anything eye catching. maybe try adding a background or some items around you to help make a more eye catching theme. 7/10 for a good start.
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Enzeru
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05-24-2011, 05:20 PM
9/10 Missing something but I can't place it.
Otherwise, I love it.
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