i feel like her stomach is empty. maybe a full shirt instead of just the shoulder thing? maybe add some color to her lips, make use of that glitch! 9/10 from me

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what glitch?

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you know, you switch her skin tone to something and then put her lips on a certain color. i believe it works on lips :yes: if it doesn't though... my bad XD

super cute, avi... love the colors... the eyes sort of match the background, maybe more blue and less teal color would match better... or just add teal to your current color scheme...? still feels a little incomplete around the shoulders and legs, but you're on your way! 7/10

10/10
the colors are balanced nicely though the face creeps me out xD

7.8/10
Nice colours,and pretty good on the layers. But the fox face and tail ruins the flow and balance of it a little bit.How about trying to add more white into your outfit?Like maybe some on the head, and waist?

10/10
I love the theme here. Well done.

You've got a really great use of color right now, it's nice to see someone wearing that background. And I really like how you've paired that white skin. 9/10!

8/10 It has good balance, and looks pretty good. It also seems a bit simple. But I like it.

9/10. the roses are just there... not really any reason for them to be there lol. they're not really into the theme, and red is just BAM in your face on those select spots, not distributed throughout the avatar.

I adore the color scheme but your skirt doesn't hit your socks so there's and odd patch of skin. Maybe try the black stockings? Other then that I think its a really cute avi 8/10

Ill give you a 8/10. I like the tattoo things and the use of the backgrounds! think you need to add something, don't know what though.xD good work though!

I'll go with a 8/10. I love all the thought you put into the 'haunted' theme, from the spider to the scream mask. 8D Your mohawk, though, doesn't quite match the colors in your suit or cape, and I thought slippers were an odd choice of footwear. Somehow, still, you manage to make it look good!

I love your avatar. It's pretty! I like the use of the tail with the Bone Warrior like that. The background looks odd but at the same time it gives that sunshine through the water feel to the avatar. Overall, 9/10

you need more lavender to balance out the lavender skirt you have on. i recommend the lavender flower hairpin because it also has the yellow in it which is nice. and the adding the white valentina bow would add white to your head for balance as well. the candy corn legwarmers just dont work in my opinion. i think you need to replace it with the ione chaussettes. and then some lavender gloves would tie everything in nicely.

but i love the colour combination and the layering you have so far. the feeling and the flow is very nice as well. great use of some hard to use items.

7/10

really teal. kudos on matching the hair though! and the seafoam (is it?) looks really good. the black and white is also looking nice on it. The green and blue blends a little much for me though, and her blue socks are just strange XD maybe plain black or white shoes and black or white socks? the opposite of the shoes. you've already got the teal by your feet with the skirt.

8/10

Maybe get white long socks, and then yellow short ones. You need more than that itty bitty piece of yellow on the bottom. The black on the arms looks sort of awkward, so maybe try swapping the arm puffs with the white shoulder wrap and use something black near the waist to make the jacket and the skirt pop a little more. You definitely need more black on the top to even out the bottom, too, though I don't exactly have any way to do that just yet. (xD) The blue crown and staff aren't the same color as the teal... I don't know if you should change it or not, but IMO it's annoying, then again, there's not a lot of perfectly-matching items here on Mene.

So, I think that's it. I'd say like, 6.5 / 10, because it's sorta simple for me.

EDIT: Oops. My computer's glitching. Lemme edit.

EDIT2: chronic_heartbreak14: Here ya go.

9.5/10 nicely done with the layering and the balance with thecolours.

You're theme is really interesting and you did a good job balancing colors. 9/10 for a great avi :)

i think you should add some green at your feet. like grass. it would make more sense then nothing. other then that its a great theme and a well put together avatar. simple, but that goes with the theme.

8/10

9/10 very nicely done with the colours and layering. The only thing that catches my eye is the lack of red on your head and all of that brown. But with a hat like that, I'm sure it is difficult to find a way to make it look better. Other than that, a fantastic job you have done once again BSW. :yes:

Im going to rate this on theme alone. This is totally bad-ass xD 10/10

You balanced the red and black nicely, but I see some gold on your leg...And I don't see any gold else where.
But I love the red and black on your avi. The white is more concentrated in the center, maybe some white on the head area?
9/10~ <3

She's so happy, but her eyes don't seem to show that. she looks sleepy. maybe a simple belt instead of the waist wrap thing. it looks kind of clunky and out of place. the light gold touches are nice. the hat's a good way to work all the colors in too, except purple. a conundrum, how to get purple up there? a little more white on her feet, i think they have a gold and white heeled shoe you can buy in hopscotch. the white/gold goddess platform heels? they're white AND gold :D

i'll say 8/10 :)

9/10
White stockings would look cute ^.^
Feels empty otherwise.