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#776
Old 06-11-2011, 12:59 PM

7/10 I like the use of the wig! I haven't really seen anyone use it. good work.

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#777
Old 06-13-2011, 06:59 AM

his eyes are a little odd, but i an tell you're going for a theme rather than matching. matching: color distribution is off with the red and white, need more white by your feet and more red on your waist and head.

theme: 9/10 because i'm not really sure what the dragon is for! you've got a great fancy man, but the dragon makes me think of Ernest Drake :sweat: the dragon researcher. XD

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#778
Old 06-13-2011, 08:26 PM

Let me save this spot. /antininjashield

Now that that's dealt with.
I like your color scheme, but little bits and pieces stick out to me that are slightly unappealing. For instance, your whole avatar is covered, though there's that little bit of skin that's flashing right under your skirt. Maybe it's just me, but it's catching my eye. The stockings also catch my eye, though I'm not sure what you're going for there so it's sorta hard for me to suggest something. It's just that the pattern is so different than the not-patterns of the rest of your avatar. I'd suggest using a bold purple and then maybe white fishnets over that or white tube socks, even though that sorta conflicts with the elegant-y theme that's there.

I'd just like to touch on the head area for the moment, and then I'll get back to the avatar. I think that you should make your hair color purple, but keep the same style, and get a white hairpin instead to balance it out, because you have purple everywhere else and little patches of white here and there. The white hair also looks weird to me. I know there's not much you can do with getting more pink and green up there, so I'll leave that alone.

Anyways. Sorry for writing so darn much, but it's just all coming to me. I think you should try to shove some green around your wrists or something, because there's just pink and purple by your thighs. Bah. I'm such a layering maniac now...

So I'll stop badgering you. 6.5 or 7 / 10. I'm not sure which.

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#779
Old 06-14-2011, 05:06 PM

you need some teal on your head. the goggles will work nicely imo. and you need to use a different orange item for your head because the one you are currently using has brown on it and there is no brown in the rest of your outfit. i suggest the orange organza. after that i think it will be perfect. i love the colour combo and the item selection everywhere except on the head.

8/10

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#780
Old 06-14-2011, 07:39 PM

i'd say a little more orange on your feet would look good. and a tad more on the right side of your head, the egg makes it look a little odd to my face. all the browns are really nice together, but i can't tell a lot of them apart. this is a really good thing, it makes it look great and her face is so adorable. except for the shocking orange (which gives it a special POP) i don't see any problems.

9/10

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#781
Old 06-15-2011, 09:57 AM

It's okay, but it doesn't really stand out to me as amazing. I think there is a lack of black to the feet. I like the way the red and gold works though 4/10

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#782
Old 06-15-2011, 06:17 PM

I like your avi, its cute.^^ Don't know how much the pudao matches but I don't care to much for matching. 8.5/10.

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#783
Old 06-16-2011, 01:27 PM

I like it, your avi's eyes say it all..."OMG what did I just do?" And the little devil makes it even better. It might need shoes to complete the whole look, but otherwise very nice. 8/10

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#784
Old 06-16-2011, 05:45 PM

This is actually pretty decently balanced. The colors themselves are also very original and well put together. For the originality I give it an 8/10, but I think the tie is a little off kilter. It looks black, when everything in the outfit is brown, and that tie also contains the only pink in the outfit. Either spread the colors out, or remove them. :)

Love it, though.

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#785
Old 06-17-2011, 12:38 AM

oooh shit thats a pretty avatar! for a duo tone its really great, and i love that dress! the gold and emerald work GREAT together. she looks like a perfect irish princess. :>

matching: check! theme: check! color dispersion: check!

the heels seem a tiny bit brighter than the other golds, but nothing terrible and it might be my eyes so i'm still going to say 9/10, some darker socks for black would look splendid, i thought they were green for a moment.

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#786
Old 06-18-2011, 03:16 AM

6.5/10 - Except for the gold, the colours go well together, but the styles don't really seem to coordinate. Sorry. :/

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#787
Old 06-18-2011, 03:54 AM

7/10. You look amazing and regal as usual, but you look a little bare around the neck and arms. The only other thing I can think of is the gold in your hair which doesn't really match. Maybe put silver there instead?

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#788
Old 06-19-2011, 04:37 AM

10/10 I love your balance of color, and the fact that the outfit looks like it belongs.

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#789
Old 06-19-2011, 06:00 AM

7/10
looks great but looks like its a work in progress but i like it so far. especially with the mask. c:

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#790
Old 06-19-2011, 09:26 AM

ooh desi it looks so pretty. the candy doesn't match the other yellows though, it looks more orange (i hate it when that happens >.<) everything else looks wonderful though. may i suggest Welcome basic headband and the Red Felt Camilia Hairpin, perhaps? just so its a little more matchy? or keep your headband and look at the yellow camilia hairpin? just for kicks?

i shall give it an 9/10 :)

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#791
Old 06-19-2011, 03:32 PM

I really like the colors you chose and the balance is really good but the background confuses me a bit but it's still a very good avi. 8/10

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#792
Old 06-21-2011, 12:33 AM

4/10 it's a good start, but it still seems very empty, and not much is going on.

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#793
Old 06-22-2011, 09:41 PM

i'm going to give you an 8 I feel like its a bit all over the place. >.<

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#794
Old 06-28-2011, 01:24 AM

It's so pretty! :D 10'd

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#795
Old 06-28-2011, 02:30 PM

I'm going to say 6/10. I would add black tattoos, just to fill in the chest and legs with a bit of design. The oranges I feel are just thrown in. So I feel that you could add a bit more in that department. Overall, its CI madness to me. >.<

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#796
Old 06-28-2011, 04:47 PM

I'm going to rate you a 7/10 I feel that it is a bit red heavy and light on the black and white. It could be more balanced, but I like the ninja thing you have going, without overly making it a Ninja OMGWTF avatar.

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#797
Old 06-29-2011, 03:01 PM

:drool: I love everything about your avi 10/10

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#798
Old 06-29-2011, 04:48 PM

10'd again. I wish I could have the variety in items you do :D I plan on having an angelic avatar one day!

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#799
Old 06-30-2011, 12:26 AM

DUDE!! This is amazing!
9/10
Its missing something on your belly though, but still really awesome.

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#800
Old 06-30-2011, 01:14 AM

7/10 It is underdeveloped. Add more items throughout and possibly a third color to mix it up some.

 



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