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#1176
Old 09-29-2011, 10:43 PM

I really adore the head layering on this avatar for some unknown reason. You're making the red-black-and-white colorscheme work well to your advantage. Though I do think you could have had something white under the jacket, and have taken out the white belt, which doesn't seem to fit. The yin-yang circle on the floor doesn't really need to be there, nor the panda, and I think you could have had red boots or something of the nature there... If we have those. So yeah, it's the little things that make me say:

7 / 10

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#1177
Old 09-30-2011, 01:57 AM

I'm not sure if you were going for a suggestive outfit or not so I'm not sure how I really should rate. Are we waiting on a skirt? Also I might remove the bow in the back it seems really out of place at this time or if you want to keep the bow maybe have something red around the neck, doesn't need to be much: 6/10

(for who ever rates me: should I do something with Olympic sashes?)

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#1178
Old 09-30-2011, 12:51 PM

8/10 I like the colours you used and the look of your avii tho use something brownish on your head as it look like just plain black though not sure if it meant to be like that and what you gonna do with olympic sashes?? o.o interesting to know

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#1179
Old 09-30-2011, 12:58 PM

Ace you look Awesome! Awesome colors and balance! I love the panda at the bottom!
10/10

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#1180
Old 09-30-2011, 06:23 PM

I love it 10/10

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#1181
Old 09-30-2011, 08:46 PM

I love the layering up top SDG! So lovely!!!! And the bootom too for that matter XDDD This is so whimsical! I love the fact that you have blue eyes and the only thing that matches them is the bird right next to you!!! 10/10

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#1182
Old 10-01-2011, 12:29 AM

I love everything seems to pop out for the most part: 10/10

@Ace Strife: I looked at brown head items and didn't find one that would work with what I have, I am looking at gold items but am not sure if that would be too much on the head due to the eyes. As for the sash I was thinking of getting an orange or black one to fill leg area a bit more. My main thought with getting an orange one was due to I have orange in the staff and it would be nice to carry it over to the main body.

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#1183
Old 10-01-2011, 01:43 PM

while i really like it i think the staff doesnt fit with the over all outfit. to make it fit, you would have to add touches or orange everywhere. i also think you need some brown on your head to bring that colour right to the top of your avatar. i really like that you used the dirt to bring the brown to your feet and the head stones for the grey.

overall, very nice outfit. 7/10

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#1184
Old 10-01-2011, 03:46 PM

Bsw I love your avi shes so pretty and well balanced 10q/10

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#1185
Old 10-01-2011, 03:57 PM

SDG: Your colors are good, but I think the head area is too heavy. Maybe lose the headdress? 7/10.

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#1186
Old 10-01-2011, 04:47 PM

I actually quite adore this avatar. The colors are so unconventional and yet in this avi they work spectacularly together. I love the forest background also adds a nod to the avi. You remind me of an evil witch of some sort which is cool. Overall I think this avi deserves a 8.5/10

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#1187
Old 10-03-2011, 12:58 AM

well i think you need some orange by your feet and then it would be perfect. i love the layering and the crazed look you have. you made the skin entirely black and it looks really good. i also love the combination of the last CI and the new one. very creative and very halloweeny. definitely a daemon and a crazy one at that.

9/10

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#1188
Old 10-03-2011, 01:10 AM

I love how you used the new CI and others to make the avi! It's great! The only thing is the light beige-ish around the chest stands out some so I think you need more of that color on the legs - cause the anklets with that color don't seem like enough
9/10

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#1189
Old 10-03-2011, 01:55 AM

Nice color scheme, but you could've spiced it up so much more with layering instead of opting out for the leggings, skirt, belt, and top. At least, that's the way I think. It just needs more... more layers.

6 / 10

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#1190
Old 10-03-2011, 06:17 AM

8/10 very nicely done. But it just seems too bare on the arms and neck.

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#1191
Old 10-03-2011, 02:55 PM

I love the addition of the white I think it pulls in very nicely <3 10/10

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#1192
Old 10-04-2011, 02:36 PM

9/10 really nice avii though I feel like you could put some ivory colour near the feet.. I know there is hardly any item but if you could find it it be nicee

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#1193
Old 10-04-2011, 03:42 PM

Omg Ace I love your avi Everything is perfect 10/10

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#1194
Old 10-04-2011, 03:44 PM

I love the color scheme and what you did with the eyes! But, the emblem thing on the hat throws me off, and so does the lace on the right leg, so IMO (which isn't as good as others'), 8/10

Also the URL in your sig is not complete or something. >.<

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#1195
Old 10-04-2011, 08:16 PM

I love your theme, but I think you need a little pink and a little more black at the feet. 9/10

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#1196
Old 10-04-2011, 09:19 PM

Very nicely executed, and great layering! 9/10
To me, that gold thing on the head is the only thing wrong with the avatar. It just doesn't match with anything, and sticks out.

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#1197
Old 10-04-2011, 09:40 PM

This looks like a firey man-chu mash up. XD

I like the fire, the horns and things that make you look demonic. I think one weapon would be better, because it seems like it is over loaded right now. And the facial hair + eye brows just doesn't work for me.

7/10

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#1198
Old 10-04-2011, 11:18 PM

I honestly think you should add a bit more reddish-pink to the bottom, waist and neckline of your avatar. That would probably clear some stuff up really well. I think that's all I can say, because anything else added or taken out would probably lead to severing that 'creepy kitty' look you've got there.

8/10

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#1199
Old 10-05-2011, 09:54 AM

10/10 i totally love the avii.. I wont say any other suggestion

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#1200
Old 10-05-2011, 02:42 PM

10/10 For you ace :XD
Very nicely executed avatar. The layering is well done, and the colours are very greatly balanced! A very nice job well done like always =3


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10/10 For you ace XD
Very nicely executed avatar. The layering is well done, and the colours are very greatly balanced! A very nice job well done like always = 3

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