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bloodstainedwings
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06-08-2012, 10:00 AM
the bits of gold are throwing my off a bit. i think that if you removed the gold items, it would actually improve your outfit. and the make sure you still have the floral colour by your waist, use a sash or belt instead of the one you are currently sporting.... oh oh or the new high waisted belt from the recent event, that would be perfect!
other then that, i love the teal and floral and beach colour combination. and the hints of black are precise and perfect. excellent layering and great overall flow.
9/10
note for the person rating me:
i am twinning Siri's outfit currently. i would like to know how well you think i did on twinning her . if there is room for improvement, please be as detailed as possible. I would like to know. I want to do her outfit justice.
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06-08-2012, 10:46 PM
I think you've done a pretty good job of twinning the avatar. I like the inclusion of some of the same colors but with different hues to create a different effect. Hers is bright, while yours is subdued and eerie. I think the background might throw it off a little bit though. Hers doesn't have a background and backgrounds always create a different look in avis and I always feel if your twinning either both need backgrounds or neither.That's my only real critique of the idea though. 9/10
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06-09-2012, 04:46 AM
I love love love the look of the tattoo's with the gray skin. It is something I would have never thought of! And looks great. But I guess I have to rate the Avi as a whole xD I feel like you need a more decorated pairs of underwear. The rest of the Avi has oranges, and flames, and is just decorated. I feel the underwear is a bit plain in comparison. So I just think you need more there ^_^ 7/10
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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06-09-2012, 02:28 PM
I am giving you a ten out of ten for a unique color pallet.
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Roka
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06-10-2012, 05:34 PM
I'm going to give you an 8/10, just like last time. I don't see any changes made for the worse.
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06-10-2012, 11:05 PM
The big block of orange from the overcoat thing is throwing me off. Is there something you could layer over it maybe? Overall though, 8/10. I really like the colors and such^^
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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06-11-2012, 01:02 AM
10/10 for awesome use of colors.
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06-12-2012, 12:36 AM
9/10 its a cute avi
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bloodstainedwings
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06-12-2012, 01:22 AM
9.5/10 i love the background layering and the overall feel of the avatar. but, and you knew there would be a but. the brown in the wings isnt anywhere else in your outfit. your hair doesnt match. and neither do your eyes. that all being said, i still f-ing love it. i would probably change the hair to the super long one and make it match the colour of the wings a bit better... and maybe make the eyes gray. but you dont have to. i love it all the same.
note for the person rating me please:
I am currently twinning Siri's outfit. I would like to know how well you think I did and if there is room for improvement, please be as detailed as possible. oh and if you like it, vote for her in user picks please! XD
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06-14-2012, 03:09 AM
Kind of evil looking but interesting theme... 7/10
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06-14-2012, 03:29 AM
7/10 Very simple, but I love the colors.
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06-14-2012, 05:08 AM
It's pretty simple but cute at the same time. Technicalities aside, it not too badly done. 6/10
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06-14-2012, 09:53 AM
I'd say 8/10 'cause your lower half doesn't quite make it for me. The pink socks/tights are too shimmery, maybe if it was more of a pale pink, it'd work, but maybe you don't want to be too matchy matchy. If the socks were just paler in any color palette of your piece would work. Than, the greenery above your head, just kinda overkill. I can see what scenery you want and I like it, but.. I think right now its top heavy.
I wish that belt was chunkier, but than it could take away from the decoration on your back. It's hard to pinpoint it. What would you think about the leaf item that covers your crotch? or is that another shade of green. I really do like your concept though.
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06-14-2012, 11:00 AM
4/10
i like the colorsheme but that mask destroys that wonderful outfit for me =/
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06-14-2012, 07:43 PM
very good use of colors and glasses are really cute with the rest of the theme... 9.5/10? :)
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bloodstainedwings
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06-14-2012, 08:45 PM
i love the colour useage, but i think you need some hot pink shoes and a leaf green scarf. the dirty punk scarf will do perfectly. i also would like to see more layering or more nakedness ie: either replace the shirt with a bra and leave it at that, or add a hot pink skirt, sock and shoe layering, hairpins, scarf and gloves.... either or works for me. as i do love naked avatars. very cute though.
7/10
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06-14-2012, 09:18 PM
I the avatar is overall done pretty well. It seems to be missing a bit of the "pirate" colour up towards the top but since you're twinning someone's avatar that can be overlooked. I think as far as the "evil twin" theme goes it's pretty well done. I especially love the mustache addition. I'd give it a 8/10 for creativity and the whole "twin" theme.
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06-14-2012, 11:55 PM
I like it, but I think your hair might be too light. Or maybe the stockings aren't light enough? Also, the green on your head and the green on your shoulders is sort of killing it for me. One of them should probably go, and I'm thinking the green on your head should stay. If you could find something to add a touch of red to the bottom, it would be great.
The background also bothers me a little bit, I feel like the crescent and the wood thing are clashing with each other.
Right now, I'd give it a 7/10.
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06-17-2012, 12:13 AM
I like the avi the balance of colors is really quite awesome and you using pastels which I shy away from all the time, but I think it might be a little bit better without the touches of yellow as they seem mildly random. Also, the blacks might not be necessary as well. 9/10
For the person rating me, I'm twinning Kat Dakuu, so I want a rating about that and overall effect
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Maka-chan
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06-17-2012, 08:13 AM
8/10. The scheme looks nice and all but I think you have too much of items around your avatar or over by using the ink blott,book of nightmares.
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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06-17-2012, 04:08 PM
Cute and simple, love the colors. The only thing that bugs me is the hair. It seems a bit to orange for the rest of the avatar. I think it would look better if you tried to match the brown in your hair. nine point five out of ten.
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06-18-2012, 06:43 PM
9/10
Really cool. I like the simple pallet you used. Simple and cool, that is the way to go Kirin.
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06-18-2012, 07:21 PM
9/10
It works really well together. The colors match, there's a great theme of fire-demon creature thing, the only thing that's bugging me is it seems a bit cluttered, but that could be my own taste.
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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06-18-2012, 07:22 PM
Ten out of ten for having a very unique avatar.
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06-21-2012, 05:10 AM
I like the evil Robin Hood-ness of it. Like this is a Robin Hood who steals from the poor to give to the rich or something like that. Or maybe he's feasting for a little bit of blood? He's certainly not being altruistic though. Very creative avi! 10/10
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