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04-01-2014, 01:16 AM
what.. is that snout made from?
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Suona
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04-01-2014, 02:08 AM
The very eyes you have all over your body now 
The "nose" is one of the eyes. Then there is the bone warrior mask, the ebony revenant visor, and then the tusk teeth from the magical mysteries ei. *contented sigh* I really do adore how those layer together to make that face. I really liked that avi.
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04-01-2014, 02:09 AM
yeah... this is my first time using this item.. i just happened to clik on it and went. "OH"
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04-01-2014, 07:59 AM
This is more difficult to pull off than I expected.
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04-01-2014, 08:18 AM
Oh, very nice layering Souna. That doesn't really suit the look I'm aiming for, but thank you.
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04-01-2014, 08:39 AM
What about the little nose from the "It's a MONSTER!" ei?
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04-01-2014, 10:14 AM
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Originally Posted by Suona
Here's a bit on Leo's
And now a little on Gemini. It's element is air.
I'm not sure if that helps orient anyone a little more, but it's just a little bit of what I found that seemed relevant to making an avi
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I feel like the avi isn't quite strong enough to represent Leo. Also, I think a larger, more defined crown would suit it better. Maybe a little bit of armor and a determined face. I like where you're headed, but to me it doesn't really say Leo yet. The hair is a bit off in color, and maybe if you aren't going to use the lion mane item, you can use a hair that looks more like a lion's mane. And the red wisps coming from the feet don't really suit it, in my opinion. :)
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Suona:
Oh I know a lot about my star sign. But thanks!
The hair is as it is as it directly mimics the astrological symbol for leo. And yeah I still need to fiddle with the tones on the hair >.<
I've decided to go fro a less obvious route than being a lion. Because i feel thats obvious and there's so much more you could represent. The magical candle colour/astrological colour of Leo is yellow, hence the predominant colour. It is also ruled by the sun, hence why the sun is there. I added gold because of it's connection to the sun, and also to give that regal edge. I also made sure to have a firey colour scheme as Leo is a fire symbol. :)
I agree about the lower red whisps, but will that make it too top heavy.
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Also, how is everyone getting that swirly whispy background?
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04-01-2014, 10:33 AM
It's just a bit too girly looking to me to get a Leo vibe from it. I wouldn't be able to guess it by looking at it. And I still stand by the hair color looking off.
The background is from the squishy space protector CI.
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04-01-2014, 10:34 AM
Okay. Yeha I'll make the face meaner.
ANd I agreed with you on the hair colour hun.
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I think it's starting to get better, feedback please <3
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04-01-2014, 05:39 PM
I love the background change. it suits your avatar so much better
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04-01-2014, 05:55 PM
Yeah! I didn't know what the items are called.
The eyes look a lottt better!
Is it speaking leo more?
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or
Is it speaking more leo to you?
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04-01-2014, 07:25 PM
Oh yes, that is much better!
And I think the red lips suit it better.
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04-01-2014, 07:40 PM
Suona; gold back piece or no back piece
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04-01-2014, 07:42 PM
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Originally Posted by Eastyy
Yeah! I didn't know what the items are called.
The eyes look a lottt better!
Is it speaking leo more?
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Is it speaking more leo to you?
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the addition of the fluffy ruffle is brilliant and i love the golden headdress. I feel it really gives a starry look. the overall avatar is very well layered as well. It does come across as a starry avatar and a zodiac and based on the items i would guess leo but it doesnt scream leo to me. I am not sure there is anything you can do to make it scream leo though that wouldnt take away from the avatar. adding the leo the lion stuff i feel would take away from the overall avatar as it doesnt match and would over crowd. lets see...
what if you made subtle change... like adding the round ears from the leo ci and a tail... but not the tail from that ci... something more subtle like the blond tail from the centaur. it would add just a touch and not be overwhelming like adding the mane would be. ... or maybe just the tail would be enough... i dont know... i would play with it a little. see if you can get it slightly more lion like. the just the tail option i think would look better without the headdress. and it would bring in the colour from the ruffle down to the rest of the avatar without being too much. the tail i feel is a good idea... the ears though... they just are the wrong colour...
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04-01-2014, 07:49 PM
bloodstainedwings: the lion tail goes I think what do you think, does it give that leo edge?

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or this with the headress too.
I don't know if it completes it or is too much.
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04-01-2014, 07:59 PM
Perhaps equip-able eyes? While those eyes are better than what you had, then don't feel stern enough.
And I think it looks good with the tail and without the headdress.
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04-01-2014, 08:03 PM
I find equip eyes ugly, plus I dont want her too mean, as leos though serious and attention seekers are actually really quite playful.
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04-01-2014, 08:11 PM
I don't mean, mean. They just don't seem right to me.
Perhaps it's the skin. A more tan color skin would look better, I think. Yeah, I think that'd help.
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04-01-2014, 08:19 PM
actually i like the eyes. but i can see your point. and a darker skin but be brilliant. but as for the tail... i cant actually see it. perhaps it was too subtle
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04-01-2014, 08:19 PM
Quote:
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Eliminated Contestants
/insert Jaws theme song here.
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04-01-2014, 08:25 PM
Can you not see the tail on the first one bsw I can!
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04-01-2014, 08:33 PM
lol hummy you are the best!
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Can you not see the tail on the first one bsw I can!
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no i cant... maybe its because of the mene tag across the middle. i might be able to if you were wearing the avatar...
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04-01-2014, 08:36 PM
The tail is going upwards from the but and touches behind the hair
And I think the eyes would be more appealing to me on a darker skin. Because if I look at them, they aren't bad, but they stand out weirdly on such pale skin.
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What a gorgeous banner!
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04-01-2014, 09:13 PM
oh its because you are not using the tail i suggested. lol. i was looking for that specific tail. lol. thanks suona for the explanation! lol. its funny how you only see what you want to see eh?
but that tail does work really well and helps make the whole avatar look more leo.
p.s. for a second there suona i thought you were someone else.
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04-01-2014, 09:14 PM
Yeah, I've changed the skin tone, but my question is veil or no veil.
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