Yeah, it may be some weird tag like xyz or something.

I also have some WIPs

outfitsX

leaving home
or at the airport
at the beach
, , in the hotel room
on a cruise (in your room)
at the train station
vacationing at a castle

Which one do you all like best? I'm trying to decide on a scene, and if my outfit needs tweaking.

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Originally Posted by Libra

I don't even remember what that item is... Could you show us a link? I remember it now xD Let me see if I can figure some out.

Also, what is y'alls opinion of my WIP:

I really like the head layering! Very unique!
I kind of feel like there is a lot of brown and red though.

Libra, i really like yours Somehow I feel like its Punk Anastasia going to Hogwarts. xD

Originally Posted by Libra

I don't even remember what that item is... Could you show us a link? I remember it now xD Let me see if I can figure some out.

Also, what is y'alls opinion of my WIP:

I like her! She's cute. Interesting color choice, but it works. The only thing that's bothering me is I feel her sleeves are getting lost in the train car.

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Also, fireprincess, I like the first environment. I think it's cool that you have her leaving home! I think that you have a bit too many colors in your avatar. I love the vibe her clothes have, but I think the bow in her hair needs to be a more neutral color. The orange doesn't seem to work with the other colors. Maybe a beige, orchid, or white bow would work?

I gotta get to work on my entry. Perhaps tonight.

Originally Posted by neller

I like her! She's cute. Interesting color choice, but it works. The only thing that's bothering me is I feel her sleeves are getting lost in the train car.

---------- Post added 06-16-2014 at 11:59 PM ----------

Also, fireprincess, I like the first environment. I think it's cool that you have her leaving home! I think that you have a bit too many colors in your avatar. I love the vibe her clothes have, but I think the bow in her hair needs to be a more neutral color. The orange doesn't seem to work with the other colors. Maybe a beige, orchid, or white bow would work?

Awesome! Thanks for your advice! So, besides the bow, should I change any of her other garments to a different color?

Originally Posted by neller

I like her! She's cute. Interesting color choice, but it works. The only thing that's bothering me is I feel her sleeves are getting lost in the train car.

You can probably tell that my first instinct is to pull from the colors in the background to help me choose which ones to go off of for the outfit. The idea I was going for was a trendy traveler. Someone who would dress differently if they were going to LA, or New York, or Paris.

I'm having issues with this...


first I can't find any shirts that go underneath this shirt for some reason. I was going with the old "dress up for flying" that used to exist. Flying first class of course, sitting in the dining room looking out at the view from the air.

Okay, what does everyone think of this one:

I always dress casually when traveling, no matter how I'm going. BUT I'm an incurable over packer. EVERYTHING gets packed. So the biggest part of traveling for me is the packing. I'm hoping that this avatar conveys that.

I feel like it does. And its pleasing avatar to my eyes.
think just going with a bra undershirt is casual business look enough. xD

Well...it's casual! Haha. But I don't know about the business bit. Maybe try some camisoles?

neller:
Sorry to ping you, but do one of these look better?



And:

Originally Posted by fireprincess

Awesome! Thanks for your advice! So, besides the bow, should I change any of her other garments to a different color?

Fireprincess: The upper right one looks the cutest! I like the way the sunglasses look, and the way the bows stack! Just my opinion though

So I think I like the new style I have going for my avi! I'm still trying to get a cheezy romance, packed with style, and classic movie night to finish it up though. What do you all think?

I can loan you cheezy romance and classic movie night.

You look really adorable, Libra! What do you think of mine that I posted?

Originally Posted by Wyrmskyld

I can loan you cheezy romance and classic movie night.

Thank you! Would you mind if I kept it until I can make multiple versions of my avi? I just want to include the packed with style stuff in a variety of combinations, then I can give them back if that's ok?

THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D

Originally Posted by steelmagghia

Okay, what does everyone think of this one:

I always dress casually when traveling, no matter how I'm going. BUT I'm an incurable over packer. EVERYTHING gets packed. So the biggest part of traveling for me is the packing. I'm hoping that this avatar conveys that.

Haha, I think it's adorable! The little reindeer is a cute touch xD

Though I feel like it's too bulky at the hip on the right. Maybe trade out the side bag for one of the other purses? Like a Noelle purse? That way it's more pursy and doesn't convey a lot of brown bulk.

I also feel like it could use something in the background to break up the monotony of the wall. A mirror or window perhaps?

Thanks hon, those are great insights!

Originally Posted by Shadami

I'm having issues with this...


first I can't find any shirts that go underneath this shirt for some reason. I was going with the old "dress up for flying" that used to exist. Flying first class of course, sitting in the dining room looking out at the view from the air.

What about using one of the stringed cami's? They at least put off more of an illusion of a shirt underneath xD

Originally Posted by Shadami

I'm having issues with this...


first I can't find any shirts that go underneath this shirt for some reason. I was going with the old "dress up for flying" that used to exist. Flying first class of course, sitting in the dining room looking out at the view from the air.

I may not be old fashion to understand what you're talking about. Do you have image references? Your description makes me think blimp, but I think boat when I look at your avatar.

Originally Posted by steelmagghia

Okay, what does everyone think of this one:

I always dress casually when traveling, no matter how I'm going. BUT I'm an incurable over packer. EVERYTHING gets packed. So the biggest part of traveling for me is the packing. I'm hoping that this avatar conveys that.

I always pack for 5 days when I'm leaving for 3. I always take too much stuff, but I'm sure I would regret if I didn't take enough. Haha. I think your idea is cute. However, when I first saw your avatar, I thought of a little girl playing, pretending to go on vacation. Though, that's a cute idea, too. Perhaps it's because of all the pink. :O

Originally Posted by Angel<3

neller:
Sorry to ping you, but do one of these look better?



And:

I much like the top middle. I have to disagree with Libra on this one, simply because I have not met anyone who where's two bows like that at once. I'm sorry, dear! But I like her a lot. It's up to you one which you like. ;)

Yeah, the pink does make it little girl ish, but the black walls looked to...dark.


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How does that look?

@neller, I meant a double bow like this:


@steel, the background looks better. I agree about the pink though, maybe if it was a different pink top it wouldn't look so over powering.

Originally Posted by neller

I may not be old fashion to understand what you're talking about. Do you have image references? Your description makes me think blimp, but I think boat when I look at your avatar.



I always pack for 5 days when I'm leaving for 3. I always take too much stuff, but I'm sure I would regret if I didn't take enough. Haha. I think your idea is cute. However, when I first saw your avatar, I thought of a little girl playing, pretending to go on vacation. Though, that's a cute idea, too. Perhaps it's because of all the pink. :O




I much like the top middle. I have to disagree with Libra on this one, simply because I have not met anyone who where's two bows like that at once. I'm sorry, dear! But I like her a lot. It's up to you one which you like. ;)

i don't have a good background item to get just a blue sky with clouds... so I had it as a flying over an ocean.

Originally Posted by neller

I may not be old fashion to understand what you're talking about. Do you have image references? Your description makes me think blimp, but I think boat when I look at your avatar.



I always pack for 5 days when I'm leaving for 3. I always take too much stuff, but I'm sure I would regret if I didn't take enough. Haha. I think your idea is cute. However, when I first saw your avatar, I thought of a little girl playing, pretending to go on vacation. Though, that's a cute idea, too. Perhaps it's because of all the pink. :O




I much like the top middle. I have to disagree with Libra on this one, simply because I have not met anyone who where's two bows like that at once. I'm sorry, dear! But I like her a lot. It's up to you one which you like. ;)

Ok, thanks! Do you see anything else about it that needs changing?

Also, thanks for the input Libra :)

So I'm trying to decide which version I want to submit >_<



I'd like to add a street light, but it completely covers up the buildings and the sky, so I'd rather keep it just the way it is xD

I think I like the one with the daylight sky behind it, Libra.

My favorite is either the first or second one. I think the last three all have too dark skies


I hope Seiki is ok. I hope we see our scores before we have to submit our next entry