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#9276
Old 06-23-2014, 02:47 AM

Alright, my day at the beach.


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#9277
Old 06-23-2014, 02:49 AM

Oh jeez Cora. Your avatar should have borrowed the sunscreen from my avatar!
I actually kind of like the third one, because it's different from the typical beach look.

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#9278
Old 06-23-2014, 02:51 AM

Lol, I wanted to do different take on the beach. And that's me in a nutshell in real life.

I'm kind of leaning towards number three myself.

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#9279
Old 06-23-2014, 02:52 AM

I thought about using the blush to do a touch of sunburn, but I already did that with the camping one once.

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Old 06-23-2014, 02:55 AM

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I love the middle. She's cute with a vintage flare!
That was my favorite too! XD

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#9281
Old 06-23-2014, 03:06 AM

I was gonna use the gussy up face mask, which works great on the face, but then the body looked too bare.

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Old 06-23-2014, 03:06 AM

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I'm sorry to hear Long -hugs-



I love the flirty hairband! I was actually just looking at that a couple hours ago while trying to decide if I wanted to incorporate it into my next PM entry. Also, love the way you put the bra of order with the pink frilly panties! They match really great together. I'm surprised a man hasn't come over to join her what with the music playing xD

I almost wonder if the red and white beach umbrella would make it flow better. There's not a whole lot of red on the top of the image, and it might balance the colors out better.



Thanks I hope you guys don't want to murder me right now for it...


Story: It's been forever since Cecelia could get to the beach! Finally, a day to herself when she can, has her shovel ready to make a sand castle... And it looks like it's about to rain.


Anyone have any opinions about my entry so far?
I do too! I just wish the yellow was a darker pink to match my bra. Thanks! I didn't really care for the bathing suits on here, and liked the bra/undies combo better Maybe she's eyeing someone and is luring him in
I'll see about the umbrella

No! You totally deserved it! We don't have any hard feelings

She's so cute! Poor thing I know her pain

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I just saw the description
Maybe without the umbrella it'll look more intimidating? It's really cute, so far, I just feel like there is a tiny bit of dissonance somewhere.

What do you think about mine so far?
Do you have the cheesy romance? I think that background may work a little better because of the texture. Plus you wouldn't have the waves at the top. You could maybe try adding the orange smoke from basement dweller to cover the waves and make it look like a sunset? I've done it before and it looked nice, but I haven't tried it with that background

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Alright, my day at the beach.

I like the third one as well :)

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#9283
Old 06-23-2014, 03:11 AM

@fireprincess: I'm actually aiming for sunrise. Early birds get the best beach spots and all that. I didn't want to do waves in the back because everyone else has those so far. Not a whole lot I can do to make mine a lot different.

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#9284
Old 06-23-2014, 03:31 AM

Well, the clouds could probably work for a sunrise as well. I've not really had the chance to watch one, but I would think a sunset and sunrise look very similar. Something like this?


I do like the bright yellow hair piece you have, btw. It helps tie in the sunrise/daytime feel

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Old 06-23-2014, 03:34 AM

Thanks hon. Hrmm. I like the idea of the clouds, but the way they streaked kind of looks...toxic and unpleasant. Let me see if this dune will cover the ocean in the Cheesy Romance.

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Old 06-23-2014, 03:36 AM

No problem :)
I wish we could layer the sun with the clouds so it looks like the clouds are hued from the light instead of toxic

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What about the pink sky from the mustache bros?

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Old 06-23-2014, 03:40 AM

Pink sky is too pink and makes everything look weird, Cheezy Romance looks like sunset rather than sunrise because of the darker "night" type clouds coming in. I think this is my best option.

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#9288
Old 06-23-2014, 03:41 AM

Is there usually fog in the mornings on the beach? There's fog where I live, but I don't live on the beach XD
That might help with all the pinkness (the fog from yolo)


If you wanted to try the clouds, I think they blend a little better with this background



I'm not meaning to be pushy or anything. I'm just suuuuper tired and posting a pic of what I mean is easier than explaining at this point I just wanted to give you more options It's your choice either way :)

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Old 06-23-2014, 03:42 AM

Oooh, good thought!

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Old 06-23-2014, 03:46 AM

I updated that post some after you posted too
I forgot to refresh between edits

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#9291
Old 06-23-2014, 03:49 AM

Haha, just saw that. Actually, I think this may work. The fog gives it the right level of "still kind of morningy" feel. Not too pink. It's a shame the thick fog takes away the water.
What do you think?

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#9292
Old 06-23-2014, 03:53 AM

Oh man! I didn't know it did that. That's so weird. I guess they're on the same layer?
I really like it I like that it's lighter than your other background too, so it gives it the more morning feel

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#9293
Old 06-23-2014, 03:55 AM

Yeah, it is kind of weird. The thin fog isn't, but the thick fog is.
Thanks for helping me out hon!

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#9294
Old 06-23-2014, 03:59 AM

Huh, that's very strange.... I've been noticing some strange layerings lately. Today I found you can't have the yumeh radio floor (left?) layered with the picnic basket floor (right?) at the same time.

Not a problem at all

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#9295
Old 06-23-2014, 04:00 AM

Well, there's only like 370ish layers or something like that. There is bound to be some weirdness.

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Glasses on head or on face.

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#9296
Old 06-23-2014, 11:38 AM

I'm going to say sunglasses on the head because the sun is just coming up. Plus it looks like you're applying the sunblock for the first time that day, and you don't want your sunglasses to be in the way when you apply it to your face :)

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Old 06-23-2014, 03:39 PM

That was my thought too! Awesome, thanks hon!

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Old 06-23-2014, 04:38 PM

You're welcome :)

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Old 06-23-2014, 06:09 PM

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Story: It's been forever since Cecelia could get to the beach! Finally, a day to herself when she can, has her shovel ready to make a sand castle... And it looks like it's about to rain.


Anyone have any opinions about my entry so far?
I think there's a lack of depth in the background with the cloud. It looks ominous, but it looks more like just smoke than clouds. Perhaps you can try the background of the same color from the Cheezy Romance CI? I'm not sure how much more depth that will give.

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I just saw the description
Maybe without the umbrella it'll look more intimidating? It's really cute, so far, I just feel like there is a tiny bit of dissonance somewhere.

What do you think about mine so far?
She's cute! I love the sarong with the top. Cute combo! I think I like your current avatar more, though. There's so much more dept to the background, and I like that she's going to the beach to read...at sunset, sunrise?

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Alright, my day at the beach.

I love the last one. She's hilarious. Maybe add the red blush from cheezy romance to give her burn some glow? She feels a little plain.

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Old 06-23-2014, 10:06 PM

Thanks neller, hon! I think I'm ready to turn this one in!

 


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