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Old 09-14-2012, 03:22 AM

I should think about my stories then. The one involving Akira specifically.
I have no idea how to start her story.

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Old 09-14-2012, 03:31 AM

What kind of story were you going to make?

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Old 09-14-2012, 03:33 AM

No idea. She is a transgenic human.

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Old 09-14-2012, 03:50 AM

o.o explain? Not sure what that is.

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Old 09-14-2012, 03:52 AM

She is basically a superhuman. She looks human and all that though she was made in a lab basically.
I mean she was born but after that she was tested
and now she has unhuman abilities.

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Old 09-14-2012, 03:57 AM

Maybe in the start, you could create her ^^

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Old 09-14-2012, 03:59 AM

The story probably wont get far so I probably wont even write it.

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Old 09-14-2012, 04:25 AM

Aww... why not? It sounds interesting. even if it's a short story of her being made/escaping.

Beautiful avi by the way.

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Old 09-14-2012, 04:30 AM

I don't make short stories. That's impossible for me.
And thank you. I tried but the arms I messed up on.

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Old 09-14-2012, 04:31 AM

Ah... I don't know much about either... I'm a poet so writing stories is new to me though I try my best.

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I think the arms look good ^^

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Old 09-14-2012, 04:34 AM

I try to plan out everything in my stories though this one hasn't gotten far at all.

Well thank you.

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Old 09-14-2012, 04:35 AM

You seem to have a bit of blood there...

Well it seems interesting ^^

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Old 09-14-2012, 05:52 AM

Yep. XD

Thanks. I'll probably try to come up with a base of a plot.

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Old 09-14-2012, 06:01 AM

I'd be interested to read it if you do write it. A labrat escape story sounds so fun to read. If it's written from her perspective, thoughts racing, it's be a really fascinating story I think ^^

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Old 09-14-2012, 08:47 AM

Now that I think about it, my character Tommy could also be part of this story since she was a runaway from a facility I just never figured it out completely. the plot will come to be probably. It usually does eventually XD
Well I am off to bed. Hopefully I will stay asleep until 11am[the time I want to wake up.]

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Old 09-14-2012, 10:37 AM

Short stories are probably my favourite to write :')

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#692
Old 09-14-2012, 11:28 AM

I don't know how to write short stories.
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I can't seem to sleep so maybe I will stay up all night and then sleep really good tonight.

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Old 09-14-2012, 11:41 AM

For short stories, you need to stick to one point of view and have very few main characters (three maximum) and a very specific time frame. Also, every line you write has to either contribute to the plot or the characters, otherwise you need to get rid of it. Also you need to have the exposition, rising action, climax and falling action (as you would any story) but preferably with a twist at the end. :)

That's probably a crap explanation, but I've not done short stories since I was in Standard Grade (two/three years ago).

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Old 09-14-2012, 05:34 PM

Poet can only help with poetry so poet is no help about stories except for ideas...

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Old 09-14-2012, 06:42 PM

I'm crap at poetry. My mum's a published poet though :) she's in like seven books, and she wrote a poem about me that was in a book and the news paper

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#696
Old 09-14-2012, 07:16 PM

Hello everyone.

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Old 09-14-2012, 07:26 PM

Hey :)

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Old 09-14-2012, 07:38 PM

its fine I don't really understand it.

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Old 09-14-2012, 07:38 PM

@ Bucket - I want to be a published poet someday...

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Old 09-14-2012, 07:40 PM

I got a poem published into a book when I was in 5th grade.

 



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