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Old 08-10-2013, 06:23 PM

You are lucky that you can still write. I'm glad it's what you like~

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Old 08-10-2013, 06:24 PM

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She always has one time on my birthday I had my brother and grandpa over and she started to cry saying no one was talking to her... What grown up cries when no one is talking to them?
that sounds like my dad
though not crying but attantion seeking

if my mom, bothers or me dont feel so well, like headache or flu or what ever even a sore throat, the next day he will be all, ouch my throat, can you get me some strepsels or throat meds bla bla bla

everytime again

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You are lucky that you can still write. I'm glad it's what you like~
me too, if i couldnt write, or craft a huge part of me would be gone
since those are my tallents

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Old 08-10-2013, 06:37 PM

Your dad sounds like my dad. He will make up any excuse to get out of helping around the house. One day it's a bad back, next a bad knee, then a bad stomach, then a headach. Every day is a new excuse.

Writing is the best thing ever I'm bout to write right now.

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Old 08-10-2013, 06:47 PM

what do you write?
stories? or poems?

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Old 08-10-2013, 06:47 PM

Wow aren't headaches a female excuse? o.o Never seen a guy use that as an excuse for something

Writing is fun

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Old 08-10-2013, 06:53 PM

my dad just does it another way

says, come we go clean the kitchen for mom, then takes a cloth wipes the waterboiler, then says
i will be back in like 30 min to help
then stays away 6 hours before returning
leaving me all alone cleaning it all

even when i sprained my ankle and had to use crutches he did this to me, but then saying i am acaderating the pain and sprain i got going on, whole ankle black and blue but hey i am just playing i have pain

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everyone left suddenly? without a goodbye or something?

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Old 08-10-2013, 07:57 PM

Sorry I'm pretty distracted so my posting is rather sporratic

I usually have to spend a lot of time getting my mom to STOP doing things when she has surgery or something... keep having to yell "put that down" and stuff =.=

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Old 08-10-2013, 08:03 PM

i have that with my mom but not after that
more her need to search
we all are scared to ask her have you seen this or that
she will search and not stop till its found even if that takes weeks to find
i have to threaten her with tying her up to the chair or something

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Old 08-10-2013, 09:47 PM

Sorry took a nap, then took a walk, and wrote a little.

I am writing a scifi/fantasy novel. Though not much is online right now. A really rough draft of chapter one on my website (link in pic in my sig). Though I am changing the writing style to journal instead of third person.

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Old 08-10-2013, 09:54 PM

i write stories too
working on a childrensbook

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Old 08-10-2013, 09:58 PM

I love writing and reading takes you to different worlds that you can not go to in reality.

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:00 PM

i know haha

i wrote a not to scary kids scarystory

wanna read it?

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:02 PM

Sure that would be fun!

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:04 PM

keep in mind, i wrote it for the younger kids so it couldn't be to scary haha

plus that English is my 2nd language so spelling and grammar might be wrong

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The Tale of The Wandering Ghost

It was a warm summer night. The children just gathered around the big campfire. Here at ‘Camp Halloway’ it’s a big tradition for the leaders to tell there scary story. That night it was Nicky’s turn. Nicky was the leader of the ‘Red Feathers’ group. A group of 4 young girls and 4 young boys. He was holding a very old necklace, a locket. “This locket belonged to my grandmother, you will understand later why I brought it.” He looked at all the children around the campfire. “My story is about a girl, not older then 18.” He started the story with a low voice. “The legend tells that this girl ones was murdered. But never left earth. Her spirit was doomed to wander around forever, in the forest right behind us.” He waits a second to look around the group. As he finally starts with the story. “Two children, Aimee and Darian, where brother and sister. As in every family they sometimes don’t get along. Darian was a 13 year old boy that loved to tease and playing tricks on his 1 year younger sister. Aimee hated it when her brother teased her. One day there parents took them on a camping trip, they where to thrilled by the idea to sleep in a tent.” Nicky stopped again just for a second, but the children where so exited to here the story. “Don’t stop Nicky.” Anna wanted to hear the rest of the story. “Ok, ok.” Nicky waited a little longer to really get the group into the haunting feeling. “Mom can Aimee and I walk through the campsite? Darian was so exited that he was almost jumping, he really wanted to see the campsite. Aimee was a little scared, it was a very big campsite. What if we get lost? She asked her brother. Darian started to laugh. Don’t be such a scardy cat. He kept laughing. When there mother approved for them to look around they went into the forest. While they there playing a game, a girl appeared out of no where. She looked older then Aimee and Darian. Don’t go to far little ones, its not save back there. After she warned them she disappeared. Aimee started to scream. Was that a g.. g.. ghost? Darian looked at his little sister, Aimee could see in his eyes that he was scared too. After they realised what they just saw they ran back to the tent, but decided not to tell there parents.” Nicky stopped again just to tease the group. “Don’t stop Nicky.” Timmy said. “When will we find out about that locket Nicky?” Charita asked. “Soon sweetie, soon.” Nicky spoke with a very scary voice. “The day after they saw they ghost Aimee and Darian got very curios, they wanted to know why she was there. They went back to the spot where they saw her. Aimee looked around. What is that?? Aimee found a locket on the floor. She opened it, in the locket where 2 pictures. A girl and a boy. Aimee looked very closely at the picture of the girl. That’s her, the ghost! Aimee showed her brother the picture. Darian took the locket and found an inscription on the back. ‘To my forever love.’ This must be hers. Darian wanted to know who the boy on the other picture was. You found it, you found my locket! The girl appeared again. Now my soul is finally free now that I have my locket again, thank you very much. Darian handed the locker to her. The girl vanished forever, finally in peace.” “The End.” Nicky looked at the children. “Wow awesome story.” Dianda and Fiona where very happy with that story. “Time to go to bed now.” The children went to there bungalow’s.

The End

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i know its bad, but the kid i babysat back then wanted a campfire story about a ghost haha

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:13 PM

Very nice. I did notice a few errors. One suggestion turn the little sister's age to 2 most children at 1 are still having a hard time walking and speaking. So age 2 is more accurate for how well she can walk and talk. Otherwise it was a really nice story!

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:14 PM

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Very nice. I did notice a few errors. One suggestion turn the little sister's age to 2 most children at 1 are still having a hard time walking and speaking. So age 2 is more accurate for how well she can walk and talk. Otherwise it was a really nice story!
no you misread that
1 year younger sister
meaning shes 12, 1 year younger then her 13 year old brother

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:16 PM

Oh sorry about that! My bad! Eating when reading can sometimes trip me up lol!

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:17 PM

haha silly you

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i used to watch alot of are you afraid of the dark, and some of the stories i loved the best i wrote down but used new names
i know there not my own but i needed practice on how to word things in english and grammar and stuff

wanna read those?

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:31 PM

Not right now I'm about to go for an after dinner walk. Hehe I ate to much! Got to walk it off! You can pm me them here on mene and I will look at them at another time~

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:32 PM

ok then, have fun walking

i will go to bed then since its getting late for me haha

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there to big to pm to you

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:35 PM

Awww man I wanted to talk to you when I got back. But if it's late you should get some rest. I'll have some free time tomorrow so I can talk to you then~ See ya later!

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Old 08-10-2013, 10:38 PM

well if you walk fast, i can stay up a little
if i dont fall asleep that is haha

it is saterday night, normaly i stay up till 3 orso

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Old 08-10-2013, 11:10 PM

Well I'm back if your still up. If not have a good night~

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Old 08-10-2013, 11:15 PM

i am still here
fighting to keep my eyes open haha

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Old 08-10-2013, 11:22 PM

You really should go to sleep I will talk to you tomorrow ok~

 


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