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Old 08-10-2013, 11:24 PM

ok, sorry normaly i sleep in late so i can stay up longer but today i had to babysit early in the morning and slept really bad during the night
so i am really tired

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i'm sorry
but i will be back in like 8 to 10 hours from now

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Old 08-10-2013, 11:43 PM

Tis ok I know how that is. I will be asleep durring that time in 2 hours I'm going to bed at 10 pm then I sleep till 7 or later. Heh sis isn't home tonight she's camping with her babysitter so I get to sleep in tomorrow morning~ Taking major advantage of it!

Good night!

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Old 08-11-2013, 09:49 AM

@[email protected] so busy this weekend omg... I really hope I can remember to read the story later :O it sounds interesting...

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Old 08-11-2013, 10:55 AM

wich one?

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Old 08-11-2013, 05:39 PM

That story that got posted earlier o.o

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Old 08-11-2013, 05:50 PM

hello thread

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Old 08-11-2013, 06:01 PM

hi hunni bun bun

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look at my profile, i finaly made something nice of it

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i am bored out of my mind
why wont anyone talk to me

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That story that got posted earlier o.o
aaaah my silly kids ghost story

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Old 08-11-2013, 10:37 PM

Hey sorry I was cleaning all day... My step mom is coming home 2 days earlier than thought. So I had to get cracking! I read the prom queen story and the first part of the ghost girl story. I like them though I suggest you reread them to correct some errors in word choice and spelling. Just some few things that I know I make mistakes at time with. I love the ghost girl story I'm on pins and needles reading it! Good job!

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Old 08-11-2013, 10:41 PM

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Hey sorry I was cleaning all day... My step mom is coming home 2 days earlier than thought. So I had to get cracking! I read the prom queen story and the first part of the ghost girl story. I like them though I suggest you reread them to correct some errors in word choice and spelling. Just some few things that I know I make mistakes at time with. I love the ghost girl story I'm on pins and needles reading it! Good job!
english is not my 1st langauge sorry
i dont know how to spell those words correctly so if there misspelled its cuz i dont know otherwise

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Old 08-11-2013, 10:48 PM

Best way to learn is read more english books that will help you write better~ The more you read the better you write~

I finished all of the story and I loved it good job!

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Old 08-11-2013, 10:51 PM

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Best way to learn is read more english books that will help you write better~ The more you read the better you write~

I finished all of the story and I loved it good job!
to bad there not my stories, just practise for my english
that tv show was so good with stories

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Old 08-11-2013, 10:59 PM

Well at least your honest about it. Have you gotten a chance to read my rough draft of chapter 1 on my website?

I just got inspiration to write more unfortunately I have to clean the dishes so the kitchen is clean for when my dad gets home.

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#338
Old 08-11-2013, 11:00 PM

where can i find your website?

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Old 08-11-2013, 11:12 PM

Sorry I thought I told you before. I have a banner image in my signature that links to my website.

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Old 08-11-2013, 11:24 PM

i will read it tomorow, its late now so my eyes are tired and half hurting, that wont be good for reading haha

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Old 08-11-2013, 11:25 PM

No problem I know it's late for you. What time is it for you there btw? Here it's almost 8 pm.

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#342
Old 08-11-2013, 11:28 PM

its 1:52 past midnight

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Old 08-11-2013, 11:36 PM

You need to get to bed miss! I know I won't be on much tomorrow. I have to babysit my sister tomorrow so no free time. I will be lucky if I do get any lol! >.<

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Old 08-11-2013, 11:38 PM

no yesterday i left early cuz i couldnt keep my eyes open
but not today

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Old 08-11-2013, 11:45 PM

I can't stay up past 10, well because my sister wakes up at 6 am and I have to take care of her if her mom isn't around. She also if her mom is around wakes up everyone anyway lol! Only one morning did she let all of us sleep in till 8 am~!

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Old 08-11-2013, 11:52 PM

thats kids haha

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Old 08-11-2013, 11:56 PM

I'm so happy I'm in such a good writing mood~ I find the more I revise my story the better I get at describing scenes and making everything flow together~

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#348
Old 08-12-2013, 12:01 AM

its always important to discribe everything
since the reader can not see into the writers mind when he or she wrote it

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Old 08-12-2013, 12:07 AM

Yes I know. When I first started writing this my descriptions were too vague but I think they are getting better.

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#350
Old 08-12-2013, 12:07 AM

Well my partner is planning to write some kids stories one day ^^
I actually like reading them. *goes to read it*

 


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