publish yourself and let us be the judge

Agreed

I'm working on a personal project now, using my dragon, pirates, and monster books as reference material. It's fashioned from my best roleplay, and I've been working on it for a solid month, and only have 3 pages at least.

can we read???

Maybe. I'm a bit reluctant to post it. I don't think it's good, and if it is, I don't want people stealing my hard work.

Okay you guys, Imma type something up really quick.
//checks on boiling water

Here goes:

PiM! grew up on the streets. She was born into a wealthy family with a loving mother, father and older sister. When she was six months old, her family was travelling home from the market, and were robbed by bandits. PiM! was sleeping in the basket her mother was carrying. The bandits grabbed the basket, thinking there was food, and ran. Upon realising there was a baby in the basket, it was too late. They did not want to return the baby for fear of authorities and death. They decided to raise the child as their own.

PiM! not knowing about her family, grew up stealing to survive. She became head of a gang of bandits at age seventeen, and when the crushing news of her real family came to her, she left. She went on a pilgrimage to find her real family, in hopes of reconnecting. She never found them.

She returned later to find her gang had a new leader and revolted against her best friend. She fought for him and won, and asked him to leave with her. He rejected her offer, and went off on his own, leaving PiM! crushed.

PiM! found about an group of thieves called the Order of the Pickpocket. She found it odd that they would call themselves that, but since that is all she knew, she signed up. One of their current missions is that of the pilfering of the gold at the Dragon's Nest. To fight the Dragon Clan and take their gold...It's going to be quite an adventure!

....:D

who would steal ? ideas are original and another person can be inspired but how is it possible to steal the magical world that evolves with every word inside your head?

Pistachio_Moustache: and so, the Marauder (bandit is a too mainstream title) is born

Maha-Aamir: people can be petty like that......okay, here.

I retain all rights to the Story I have written

World's Of War

By Joseph.Vazquez

Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

The Sun rose over the Horizon of Arcadia, Capitol Planet of the Ayleid Clan-ship. Svanna Von Ayleid stood over the Edge of the Railing on her home. It allowed her perfect View of the Ocean in the Morning, which reflected the light of the Sun almost Symbiotically. Svanna smiled, enjoying the feeling of peace, for she knew that it wouldn't last forever. War was always at her doorstep, and it wouldn't be long, before it kicked down the door, and barged in.

It was called 'The War of Conquest' as every planet, race, and military power wanted a piece of existence. After the Discovery of the Void Gates, Corporal Tunnels that allowed access to even the Farthest planet, it was inevitable that other forms of life would meet. At First, there was peace. Every race had an Advanced Culture, or Technology, that every-other being wanted to experience. It was an Age of Prosperity, a Golden age, with every race involved jump-starting by 200 years.

However, with every Golden Age, there comes an Age of Aggression.

In the Corners of The Universe, a Race of Humanoid Insect's, Hailing from the planet Hydra Cordatus, and a Race of Dragon-kin, from the planet Sabhado, crafted a Fragile alliance, with the intent on Conquering the known Universe. The insectoid race was called the Cordations, named after their 'Hive Queen' Cordatus. The Dragon-Kin were called the Centrella, Lead by the Warlord Aizen Serkones. They united the two most powerful known races, and set about to conquer all that laid before them. Nearly 200 years after the Golden Age began, war followed, and that was almost the end of everything.

However, as luck would have it, there was one who managed to stand against them. The Woman's name was Samantha Von Ayleid. Samantha was the Matriarch of the Ayleid Clan of Wild-elves, and 2 years prior, united every clan under her banner, created a Formidable army of Soldiers, Mages, and Cultured Minds. Arcadia, home to the Wild Elf clans, Stood against the Armies of Both Aizen and Cordatus....and won. With the Bulk of Aizen's Armies broken, Samantha lead the Liberation of Mundes, and the Conquering of Sabhado, Aizen's Capitol world, forcing his Armies to Retreat to the planet Kerieg, where he waited for Cordatus to provide reinforcements.

Cordatus, on the other hand, had different Idea's. A Conniving and Ruthless Warlord to a fault, she met the Clan Leader Samantha in secret, and forged a Uneasy alliance, buying her armies time to fall back, and regroup. Samantha took her Army, and smashed the Last of Aizen's once foreboding Empire, ending a Reign that lasted almost 50 years. Cordatus believed that, by turning Aizen and the Centrellan Empire into a scapegoat, she had bought her armies considerable time to prepare to continue the war.

Sadly, for her, this was not to be.

Samantha, knowing that she would be betrayed in the end, lead what remained of her armies to the world of Maklore, where Cordatus was residing. It is unclear exactly what happened, but legends speak that Samantha and Cordatus battled at the Capitol of the World, two Fierce Giants of War, at arm's against each other. Whatever the Case may be, Samantha was victorious. With both the Cordation and the Centrellan empires crushed, Samntha had hoped that this would bring peace between the world's. She was wrong.

The Void left from the Conflict, had opened up the doors to many would-be 'Warlords'. Everyone wanted to be the Next Emperor, or king. What should've been an Era of peace, turned into an era of blood-shed and death. Samantha died 10 years later, leaving the Might of her Armies, and the Title of War-lord of Mundes, Sabhado, and Arcadia, to the Female line. For the last 259 years, during the course of the war, Every Reigning Monarch of the Ayleid clan was female. However, this changed some time ago, when Svanna's own Twin Brother, a Man by the name of Solonious Von Ayleid, took control of the World of Sabhado. Honestly? The Council of Clans didn't expect much of it, thinking the world nothing more then a dust-bowl, with a pitiful population. However, this proved to be exactly what Solonious wanted them to think.

In a Few Short years, he turned that Dust-bowl, into a sky-rocketing economy. What it lacked in plant-life outside the rare oasis, it made up for in Mineral wealth. This many years into the war, resources on the home planets were becoming quite scare, and trading with the other worlds is to be a necessity. Solonious exploited this, and crafted the largest producer of Mineral ore in known universe. He used the wealth to purchase plants and other species of wild-life into his world. He was also a Alternationist, being able to bend the physical word to his will, slowlying changing the Sand rich planet, into a Humid, Overgrown Forest World. He was also capable of creating Void gates, one of the few capable of doing so

An altruist to the core, who believed that everything should benefit everyone, Solonious grew up facing the worst of being brought into a Female-lead clan. Being told repeatedly that he had no other purpose, but to be a worker or a foot-soldier for the clan, Solonious made it his life's mission to liberate himself. Learning the Game of politics's from his mother, and taught combat by his father, Solonious took the Clan by storm, creating a fissure between his own Loyalist's, and Ayleid Clan hard-liners. Solonious Declared his secession from the Clan, Making his world an Independent Colony.

The Clans were in shock, as this was a foreign concept to them. Many of the hardliners wanted to lead the Ayleid home Army to take Sabhado back, but Svanna voted against it, partially out of fear that this would leave them vulnerable to attack, and partially because she loved her brother. Svanna would did not wish to see her only family, her baby brother at that, at the tip of a Ayleid sword. Though Solonious saw her as more of a rival, and a possible adversary, Svanna would do almost anything to protect him, as while his cause was in the right place, he allowed his misguided fury to jeopardize his world.

Ah well, Svanna said in her head, no point in dwelling on unpleasant issues

Are you going to link the stories to our names on the front page?

Oohh this one... i read it in the PLA it is wonderful and i really want to know more about the story...
just a scary thought... what if all the stories we right were some far off place's reality? hehehehe

Pistachio_Moustache: I would, but i don't know how.

Maha-Aamir: then they better be grateful! Arcadia is beautiful.

yes... even we humans should be grateful because our planet is beautiful too, but wouldn't you be curious how those stories travelled to your mind?

No need to ping me if I'm currently posting in Nations.
You can ping me outside of Nations, that's where I forget.
xDD
You can also ping me if I'm offline. That way, I can find the post.
:D

Okay, so for that, we would either link the post, or we could save it as a...something.
I have an idea!

when I close my eyes, and picture it, I can see vast worlds, and great epic battles, budding romance, close friendship, bitter betrayal, and dark vengeance.

Curse you, my laziness!

---------- Post added 09-22-2014 at 09:26 AM ----------

And do tell, Pisto

All finished.
Link these links to the names:

Kenome:

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/1772932497-post2.html

Sleepy:

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/1772932498-post3.html

Fuu:

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/1772932499-post4.html

Maha:

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/1772932500-post5.html

PiM!:

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/1772932503-post6.html

SZP:

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/1772932505-post7.html

Grape:

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/1772932506-post8.html

Originally Posted by Andraus

when I close my eyes, and picture it, I can see vast worlds, and great epic battles, budding romance, close friendship, bitter betrayal, and dark vengeance.

Curse you, my laziness!

---------- Post added 09-22-2014 at 09:26 AM ----------

And do tell, Pisto

and i see dreams... that compel me to write... even when i am an awful writer

I think we're all part of a galactic community

Originally Posted by SuperZombiePotatoe

I think we're all part of a galactic community

Ah yes... connected yet unaware...
That is such a soothing thought

Hehe, I would rather be aware, though. I'd like to know what's out there...

Oh, and by the way, I'm making more of the Background story, explaining how Maha and PiM met, and throwing Sleepy in the mix.

Hahaha, that's going to be great!
xD

---------- Post added 09-22-2014 at 12:03 PM ----------

Could you fix my name?
There is a typo.
You can take out that extra e and s, or you can just put PiM! xDD

Sure, PiM. Gimme a minute.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_x9zjk2MgVQ

You're all welcome.

I'm a weirdo and now realised there was an e where it shouldn't be.
xDD

---------- Post added 09-22-2014 at 12:26 PM ----------

Ping me when there are new stories, so I can make the links for them.
:D


Thanks, Andy~! :DD

I will PiM

Also, why did we have to bring Slenderman back? Goddammit, we forgot about him! He's was gone, he wasn't hurting anybody, now this guy brought him back, and a girl was nearly killed by people trying to become his proxies.

He's back now. The Tall man is back.

Originally Posted by Andraus

I will PiM

Also, why did we have to bring Slenderman back? Goddammit, we forgot about him! He's was gone, he wasn't hurting anybody, now this guy brought him back, and a girl was nearly killed by people trying to become his proxies.

He's back now. The Tall man is back.

You didn't hear about that?
I heard about it when it happened.
xD

That poor girl.
Those stupid girls.
D<