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04-08-2007, 07:26 PM
Hello there. I don't really post poems up on forums, seeing that on Gaia the writer's forums were mostly for literates who have died [as in- are no longer literate] & are now robas & idiots. So, I'm hoping that this sight will be better, ne? Please, prove to me that this sight will be much more welcoming & kinder!
Well, enough with the babbling I suppose. I'll get to the poetry now - the main reason you are all here. My first poem is called The Curse of a Smile. It was written in November, & I am very proud of it. But - it is in free-verse, as I started writing in set meters a month or so later.
Please, do not bash too harshly. I love constructive criticism & comments. <3
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- The curse of a smile,
Could such a thing be true?
The girl who’d always walk a mile,
To see things through.
“Smiles are good,"
Was the line she went by,
Smiles were good,
Why waste tears to cry?
She would always smile,
And try to spread them around,
But being her, just a child,
Couldn’t see all tears upon the ground.
She smiled when things were merry,
And even when they were hard,
She smiled, never wary,
Of the hurtful glass shards.
When others were sad and sorrowfull,
She was always there,
She’d smile at them, so hopefull,
And tried to spread the cheer.
She smiled when they scorned her,
Ignoring the cusses and shouts,
She smiled when they slapped her,
Never starting a bout.
She smiled when she wanted to cry,
Holding all the tears in,
But then she began to question why,
She began to give in,
She started to notice that things became harder,
Harder to smile, to grin,
Why did things start to get harsher,
How could she start to give in?
Was it just looking for attention?
Was her personality not enough?
She always heard them mention…
That all she was, was fluff.
She had always been told that she was ignorant,
But she had always given that smile,
What gave them the warrant?
Was she really that vile?
Time after time, she gave that smile,
And her smiles began to run out,
And when she most needed the smiles,
There were none left, she was without.
Her smiles started loosing their spirit,
As her spirit began to fade away,
She used to have such merit,
But things went, never to stay.
No one could ever tell,
When she was upset,
She’d just smile, put on the veil,
No tears to make her face wet.
“Smiles are good,”
Was the line she went by,
So why couldn’t she now?
“Smiles are good,”
Was the line she went by,
But her soul would just bow.
“Smiles are good,”
Was the line she went by,
But now she could only frown,
“Smiles are good,”
Were the lines that echoed,
In the blood as she drowned.
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upinthetrees
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04-09-2007, 01:23 AM
oh, that's so sad. Very good though. Where did you get the idea from? Just curious ^^
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04-09-2007, 01:25 AM
I got the idea from real life. :3 I was chatting with a friend one night about how we acted then & now & I got the idea.
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upinthetrees
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04-09-2007, 01:50 AM
well it's really good. So tragic though. :(
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04-09-2007, 01:51 AM
Ahaha, I'm no good at fluff though. It makes my eyes burn. xDD
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04-11-2007, 03:16 AM
- How Does it Feel
How does it feel to be HATED,
How does it feel to be cursed,
How does it feel to be jaded,
How does it feel to be hurt,
How does it feel not to know WHY,
How does it feel to be caged,
How does it feel to forever die,
How does it feel to fade,
How does it feel to be all alone,
How does it feel to be KILLED,
How does it feel to be hurt by stones,
How does it feel to be stilled,
Horrible.
Can you tell me what it’s like to be tossed aside,
Can you tell me what it’s like to be forgotten,
Can you tell me what it’s like to always HIDE,
Can you tell me what it’s like to be stolen,
Can you tell me why I must live this way,
Can you tell me what I did,
Can you tell me how to escape the FRAY,
Can you tell me where you hid,
Can you tell me what it’s like to be used as a shield,
Can you tell me what it’s like to be FAKE,
Can you tell me what it’s like to be killed,
Can you tell me what it’s like to be awake,
Painful.
Do you know how it feels to be betrayed by those loved,
Do you know how it feels to be LIED to,
Do you know how it feels to be chilled with a shrug,
Do you know how it feels to be cut through,
Do you know how it feels to be used so easily,
Do you know how it feels to fall A P A R T,
Do you know how it feels to be weary,
Do you know how it feels to go back to the start,
Do you know how it feels to be DETESTED,
Do you know how it feels to be dead,
Do you know how it feels to be HATED,
Do you know what it’s like in my head.
I do.
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L L A M A N O ! S E
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04-11-2007, 03:22 AM
So pretty, as always. ;3
But... so sad...~ ; O ;
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04-11-2007, 03:48 AM
I'm still laughing about my signature being right after it though. xD
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04-11-2007, 07:40 PM
Ho hum. Something nice now. :3
- Let me CLING to you and hear your whisper in my ear,
Let me feel your warm touch against my skin,
Let me SING to you of my feelings floating in the air.
HOLD me tight and never let me go,
Stroke my hair and close our eyes,
TELL me that you will not go.
Let me TASTE your sugary sweet lips,
Let me feel your body’s warmth,
Let my HEART begin to race and flip.
Cause face it, my love,
We can’t keep it in forever,
Just face it, love,
You can’t keep up that endeavor.
So let me sit in your LAP and fall asleep,
Let me take refuge in you, and you in me,
Let my SOUL rest so that it will not weep.
PICK me up and help me though,
I know that I can’t resist anymore,
I just can’t STOP loving you.
Let me LIVE my life with you,
Let me hold your hand forever,
Let me know that this love is true.
You know that I’m always here for you,
I know that I can always run to you,
And we know that the sky is blue.
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04-11-2007, 09:38 PM
D: Readers are loved, but commenters are loved even more~!
<3
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