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Old 04-14-2007, 03:39 AM

She heard the lightning rip through the air...
She felt it's vibrations...
She knew it was still chasing her.
She ran, feeling each ice cold droplet hit her.
Soon, she would be tired.
Soon, the rain would come harder.
It was gaining on her.
It had her cornered.
And it was the last thing she saw.
And as another kaboom of lightning filled the air,
It reached its paw up,
And she was lost.

x.x
I'm just depressing aren't I?

C+C.

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Old 04-14-2007, 03:47 AM

omg D:
your poetry is beautifully depressing <3
GET IT PUBLISHED D<

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Old 04-14-2007, 03:48 AM

=^^=
I'm flattered.

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Old 04-14-2007, 05:13 AM

I agree with ori.
This is really good!
Make us more!
Foam craves more please!
<33 =3

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Old 04-14-2007, 09:57 PM

that was great! I agree with them. I love them. They are poems made into stories...i guess that is your style then, huh?

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Old 07-22-2007, 06:26 AM

  • Storiesss?
    How would one go about doing that?

 


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