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Old 04-20-2007, 05:36 AM

If only one could bottle the scent of happiness, right?
The pure emotion availiable by the bottle,
3$ an ounce?

But then you would have to ask yourself
and every other customer of your
ingeinious product.

what is happiness now,
that it can be distributed to
all those who have
the money to buy pleasure?

If money cant buy love,
can if buy happiness?
If not,
then what did you bottle?

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Old 04-21-2007, 02:08 AM

You are such a good poet. The only poetry I can write is silly poetry. Anything else I write just sounds fake.

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Old 04-21-2007, 07:14 PM

a lot of your poetry starts with a question. I like that. It makes the reader (me) think about the topic you are writing about. I like thils theme, it really makes me think.

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Old 04-22-2007, 01:47 AM

yay thanks! I have trouble writing poetry when I'm not in the mood, so alot of the time you can really see my mood at the time reflected in my writing... ^^ thanks for reading!

 


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