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Old 04-21-2007, 12:11 AM

Life of a Teenager


Life is full of thrills,
And life can be rough,
Yet life is full of chills,
And life can be tough,
Making decisions,
Fulfilling your dreams,
Choosing your future,
Isn't easy as it seems,
Dealing with pressure,
Dealing with school,
As people criticize you,
They make you look like a fool,
Drama and gossip,
Floating around,
People are talking,
No truth to be found,
Hang out with friends,
So the fun never ends,
Don't drink and drive,
..Maybe then you'll save a life,
Becareful who you trust...
Take a risk if you must,
Share all your laughter
Smile everyday
Forget all your problems
It's better that way,
Just know who you are,
Believe that you can make it
Live your life to the fullest.
And try not to break it.





and another ^^

Selfish Mistake


I can't believe its ending
All I see are hospital walls
Things would have been different
If to temptation I did not fall.

That night was so crazy
Pouring drinks and feeling fine
But the mood was going to quickly change
It was just a matter of time.

I took one shot and then another
My throat burning as they went down
My body's floating, my mind is spinning
Everyone's playing around

Midnight came fast, I had to go
For I knew I had curfew
Behind the wheel, I go and there it ends
Through the windshield my body flew

Now I'm dying from my selfish mistake
I'll miss my family, I'll miss my friends
How my heart cries, 'This can't be real'
This truly can't be the end'..

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Old 04-21-2007, 02:42 AM

They're both so pretty! You're such a good writer! I write kind of offish poems too, so I understand how hard it is to actually put up writing for other people to see and critique.. :D

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Old 04-21-2007, 06:59 PM

I really liked them. I liked the first one, it is so true...actually, scratch that, they are both so true. I can really relate to the first one though.

 


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