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Old 05-07-2007, 12:19 AM

Ok, so here's a peice i started a while back, and I've progressed a bit since this picture was taken, but not anything really major. a bit more shading has been put in, but I was wondering if I could get some constructive criticism maybe?





oh, and just FYI, I've already taken care of the kind of really dark lines you see under her eye. I semi erased it, and made it alot lighter, so it doesn't look like she's an insane insomniac druggie anymore ^^

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Old 05-07-2007, 09:23 PM

Oo!
Very good.^_^
I really like her eyes.
From them I see evilness and as well as sadness and a bit of mystery.

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Old 05-07-2007, 11:10 PM

I love the eyelashes. Though something about the shape of the head is a little off, the left side seems too small. Other than that is is shaping up well.

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Old 05-08-2007, 02:41 AM

you need some more shading more lights and darks so it doesn't look so flat and maybe some texture specially in the hair!

 


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