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Old 05-26-2007, 02:04 AM

I will be adding more poems as I go along. Please Comment.

The call
~*~*~*~
As she watched in sorrow,
the pain she felt inside,
She felt so helpless
as her parents cried,
The girl went to her knees,
as the door slammed shut,
Tears filling her eyes,
steaming down her cheeks

That night the call came,
as she dreaded the moment,
That would pierce her heart,
She watched her mom run out the door,
As her father did earlier that night

Tears came down her cheeks once more,
as she cried,
earlier that night,
when the call came
About the sister that had died moments before

Remembering when her father ran out the door,
After a call,
they had recived a few moments before

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Old 05-26-2007, 02:06 AM

No one could see
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
No one could see it at all
the things that she holds back
with her life all torn up
the tears that she has holding back
scars and bruses under her lace

with the smile on her face
no one could tell what she was holding back

A stone with written words tells the world
a girl that was left behind

Now she watches up above
seeing that her life wasnt in vain

as she watches other children be saved
from what has killed her

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Old 05-26-2007, 02:07 AM

the butterfly
~~*~*~*~*~*~
As its wings flutter
the colour grows

as it flies, nobody knows

where it will go
where it will land
or where it will die

the butterfly is mysterious...

even to me

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Old 05-26-2007, 02:10 AM

why critize me?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
When you look at me
all you can see,
is the worst things
about me,

Even though you
dont know me....
you still critizise
everything wrong about me

it's not fair that you compare
you from me,
where we are the same inside
no word of a lie

Even though you
dont know me....
you still critizise

All the thing wrong inside

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Old 05-26-2007, 07:03 AM

So many sad words we must write, i sorry for all you had to feel ; ;
your poems are good, and sadly so painful. i hope to read brighter words from you soon.

 


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