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Old 05-27-2007, 05:24 PM

I hope I don't get yelled by this for being a noob and not finding a place to put my poetry. >_<;; But this thread is open to everybody, everybody can post their own poetry or keep them private, I respect both.

So let me start!

"Useless"

Yes, that is the term for it.
Yes, that was how you made her feel.
Yes, that was her greatest downfall.
And yes, now her greatest weakness has been revealed.

She lies in a pool of her own blood.
A single dagger near her bloody fingers.
I smiled at how forward she was.
I sighed, as I knew the smell of blood lingers.

She was vulnereable to you, in every single way.
She let herself be vulnerable to you, so you could easily see.
How fragile her life and heart was,
And the fact that how she needed you to stay.

Sorrow filled her eyes before she died.
Her apologies went out to everybody in the world.
Especially you, mostly you, she loved you.
And as you know, she just wanted to be a loved girl.

Now I am here, the bitter and sarcastic one.
Come near her, and I'll be the one to kill you.
I've watched from beginning to end.
Before a lover, and way before a friend.

Amy is no longer here, she has vanished.
Her soul ripped to shreds from your last words.
She had no more desire to live. Pity.
Eight months of corniness is enough, Seriously.

Of course, you thought you saw a woman.
Fine, defined beautifully by you obviously.
She wanted to be perfect, for you, or..
As she would always say, [God I hated it], For Us.

Yet I held back to watch the goddamn show.
Yes Yes, Pity that you couldn't forgive her.
And yes of course, everybody knows..
She was the one that ticked you off the most.

Here I lie in shame of how childish she was.
Yet of course, her relationship with you was always amusing.
But let me tell you something, she was greedy.
She wanted to help you, not to anger you.

I told her contacting your family was a bit too much.
She didn't listen, she went on about how you could die.
I simply shrugged my shoulders and let her do whatever.
Now it's over between you two, and she simply cried.

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Old 05-27-2007, 06:29 PM

All I can find to say is....wow...that certainly is a bit dark...

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Old 05-28-2007, 02:55 PM

not bad but not to good. you definitly have your dark side. i like it alot I write poetry and I like writting to make people depressed but thats my style find your own. it helps you write better and get back to me if you do find a style of your own.

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Old 05-29-2007, 03:17 PM

Hehe I'm sorry if it seems a bit dark.
But I wrote this poem after my boyfriend dumped me.
Without much explaination.
Sooo..yeah that's like my conscience talking I guess.

Sorry to freak some people out. ^^;;

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Old 05-30-2007, 06:00 PM

Is your name Amy?

That was a little wierd because it's my sister's name O_O;;;

Haha

Well it was an ok poem, I have to say I really like how often it said yes, for some reason... I like the beginning a lot

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Old 06-08-2007, 03:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Bribble
Is your name Amy?

That was a little wierd because it's my sister's name O_O;;;

Haha

Well it was an ok poem, I have to say I really like how often it said yes, for some reason... I like the beginning a lot
Yes my name is Amy.

Ohh..lol.

Thank you. :]

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Old 06-08-2007, 04:07 PM

"Missing"

Days have passed by since that day.
Many changes and thoughts've been made.
I need no more remorse from myself.
Those pointless days were bloody hell.

To move, to change, from habits is hard.
Expectations to Hope are all gone.
Dreams from the past scratched out.
In place, my steps are short, not long.

Something is missing, did you take it?
You've stolen so much from me, I want it back.
Give me my happiness and innocence please.
You owe me 8 months, so cut the crap.

I gave you your pendant back, along with your heart.
It was so much different, when our relationship had start.
I can't say anymore, memories kill me in so many ways.
Without you, every day to me, is a brand new day.

Yet I still do wonder, about you, your life.
I admit my mistake and said my apologies.
And I still haven't been forgiven, I'm sorry.
Everyday for you is a living hell for you to fight.

My tears have dried up, so no worries there.
Have your memories of us together disappeared?
I've also learnt, that nothing in life is ever fair.
Or are your memories of me hidden and feared?

I've asked a friend of mine to burn your letter.
Yeah, remember? The first letter you sent me.
Honestly, knowing that your lies burned made me feel better.
I still shrug when people ask about you, I'm happy.

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#8
Old 08-18-2007, 04:02 AM

To--DF.

Remember this day? I do.
Yeah I miss this day. I really do.
This is the past. This is our memory.
I hope you read this. I hope you do.
I know you've had enough of it.
But I haven't, until it's finally finished.
I know you can't think for it.
I know you're always mind screwed.
And all talking, really got to you.
In the end, it lead to our feud.

My Resentment Towards Perfection.
The Resentment has many details.
The Perfection was the fairytale.
It was so real, it was real, and so much emotion.
Nobody can ever understand.
I was the Woman, and You were the Man.

-LF.

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#9
Old 10-03-2007, 11:06 PM

So yeah, I miss the way this girl used to be.
I don’t know why, it doesn’t mean I don’t like how she is now.
But some things she does kind of disappoints me.
I just feel this way, and I don’t know how.

She laughs, She cries, and She complains.
I laughed, I helped, and I was here to explain.
She knows me, but I’m not sure I know her.
I always had a feeling, that I wished I’d known her better.

She’s crazy. And I mean it. And yippy once in a while.
I laugh out loud, and admire her sense of style.
We’re totally different from each other.
She’s so awesome, and there’s nobody better than her.

Her friends may not be my friends.
And my friends may not be hers.
We don’t care, we don’t give a shit.
I even remember when we were tiny nerds.

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Old 10-04-2007, 08:33 PM

Can one not be so cruel to others, or is it inevitable?
Can one respect others, with love and compassion?
Can one not pretend to be happy, and talk about their problems?
Can one, not be so rude to their friends in rough times?

I hope so.
I wish so.
I want it.
Why can't it?

Internally I'm hurt.
But I decide not to show.
Because I know.
I have to respect your words.

I'm scared. I truely am. I don't know why.
I'm scared for you. I'm scared for us.
I wonder if you ever knew how I was feeling.
I wonder if you ever knew how much I wanted to cry.

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Old 10-04-2007, 09:18 PM

I wonder if you're still blind. Or am I too complex?
I don't know why I keep asking questions
But I wish I could ask you them right now.
You can grow so mad at me sometimes, and I'm scared.
Why do you sometimes not answer me?
Or never really smile? Or laugh at something awefully dull?
..you even forgot my birthday. I mean, I can handle that, but..I sometimes wonder..what happened.
Maybe I'm not that important. I feel really offended.
I know you've been through some really tough times. And I try to support you with peace and quiet or some helpful words.
I sometimes feel..fake. I love you as a friend. But it's a fondness that grows between half a dozen years.
You're so..weird. Sometimes..I don't know you. I feel like I don't deserve to be your friend. I feel really detached from you. I really don't know what to do.

Yeah, I'm kind of scared to talk to you.

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#12
Old 10-04-2007, 10:08 PM

The night is silent. The moon disappeared.
Shadows talk behind the trees, whispering.
Let the immortal woman walk down the path.
She saw everything this world had offered.
Life, Tragedy, Love, Hate, and many more.
No weapon can kill her. No knife can penetrate her.
The shadows whispered again, talking.
She glared at the shadows and they quickly hushed.
The world had underestimated her and her pride.
She had power, power to live and rule.
But that was only her demeanor.
People she loved and adored met Death.
Yet she was left alive by a curse.
A curse to live forever, to suffer pain in more than one lifetime.
She continues to walk for hours and hours.
Knowing not a single form of life would greet her.
Evil or Good. They didn't acknowledge her.
Born from a prostitute and no father at all.
She didn't know how she survived at all.
Her raggedy black hair unwashed and untidy.
Her rags dangling from her skinny frame.
Bare walking on the path, she didn't mind the pebbles.
Because she knows, nobody will love her, nobody will see her.
Like she was invisible.

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Old 10-04-2007, 10:40 PM

Wow..three poems in one day..what's up with me. :x

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#14
Old 10-10-2007, 01:24 AM

I sit here restless with my eyes closed.
I'd love to spend a lifetime with you.
As right as it sounds and feels to us.
It is yet wrong in many ways in this world.

We both pity this society how they know too little.
We feel we are the most knowledgeable in this world
The love we share, the passion grows between us.
I wonder if we can still make the right choices.

I feel as your life is being held down.
I know what, and you do, but I do not speak of it.
We both respect each other, and handle situations.
We handle them with care, and not go too overboard.

I love being with you. Talking with you.
Do you feel the same? I can bet on it.
We hope for the best, wish for the best.
And be together, until the mere future.


 


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