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Old 05-27-2007, 06:15 PM

I wrote these -they're not really poems, but just feelins written down- when I had been thinking too much. They're all written on different days and times. :) Enjoy, or be confused.

Sinfull Lover

It seems ages ago that I was swept of my feet by his love.
And still, I remember my attempts at kissing him
like it was only yesterday.
Being swallowed by those beautiful, yet treacherous lips.
Oh! the pain that dwells inside my body and heart.
Now I can only despise him,
and think of our moments together being filled with
anger, grief and terror.

I am

I can't quite describe, the feelings.
That moment.. they were so overwhelming.
Yes, I cried. But does it matter?
I am only a tiny fragrant of this all.
So tiny. So incredibly small.
But I'm still someone.
I'm not that small I can be forgotten.
I am human.
I am Kim.

Balance

The world goes round.
The world moves
us, tiny fragrances.
How can we be so
disrespectfull to whatever
made us?
We abuse, fight,
murder and battle.
We care, love,
create and restore.
Is this world balanced
after all?

And last, but not least, something I can't quite call a poem.. It's more like a story to make people think. C:

'Why?'
It's a question I frequently ask myself.
The answer? I don't know.
The only thing I know, is that that question
will be there for eternity.
'Why are we here?'.
'Why do people hurt each other?'
'Why?'
And even if all those 'Why'-questions would be answered,
then there are still the 'What' and 'How'-questions.
An eternal discussion about it all.
Impossible.

Will we get an answer to those questions,
when we die?

Hope you liked it. n w n

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Old 05-28-2007, 08:45 AM

Hay they arent bad at all now are they?

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Old 05-28-2007, 09:44 AM

Um.. thanks! I think. o __ o ;;

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Old 05-28-2007, 09:46 AM

That was a complement my dear :P

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Old 05-28-2007, 01:38 PM

Oh, yay! xD Thanks again then.

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Old 05-28-2007, 02:49 PM

not to bad..... I was hopeing to met someone with the same talents as me lets speak in private about are work....... pm me or I'll pm you or we can speak here either one.

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Old 05-28-2007, 02:56 PM

Talent? Heh, I wouldn't want to call it like that. I simply wrote down what I felt. x3;;

But thank you for liking it. Have you posted any of your own yet?

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Old 05-28-2007, 03:02 PM

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Originally Posted by ` Cookie Jar Inc.
Talent? Heh, I wouldn't want to call it like that. I simply wrote down what I felt. x3;;

But thank you for liking it. Have you posted any of your own yet?
no, not yet. Some of friends yet but not some of my own would you like me to?

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Old 05-28-2007, 03:05 PM

this is one I wrote in school with like 5 mins it's not as good as my others but the other take time to type up

I stand there by the hidden.
they are damned to internal
sufforing.
with-out effortless motion
each one grasps life and throws it over there
shoulder and into the sea of hell.
it can never be retrived for it
will be sent directly to
place everyone fears.
These hidden have thrown
it all away.
The memories to come.
Laughs and smiles.
They will have never exsisted.
For hell is a place every one fears.
Even the hidden.

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Old 05-28-2007, 03:17 PM

That's a nice one. :) Some grammar faults, but hey.. It's the thought that counts. It's a lovely poem. n w n

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Old 05-28-2007, 03:19 PM

i am just typing up another one written from 3 days ago.

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Old 05-28-2007, 03:20 PM

here's the one i promised:

The floor is dampend by each trickle.
The room filling with sounds takeing each breath as it's own.
The moon glimmers endlessly search for a smile.
Not a wind in the dark can break this feeling.
The feeling of sorrow, grief and misundertsnading will take you away from the world.
Mid-night passes slowly with each tick of the everlasting clock.
Each day passes slower and slower.
because only time can mend a broken heart.
not only can it mend that sadness inside it helps regain your courage.
With each passing hour rember every heart can be saved from internal sadness.

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Old 05-28-2007, 04:21 PM

Oh, I love this one. This is my favorite one so far! o __ o

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Old 05-28-2007, 04:35 PM

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Oh, I love this one. This is my favorite one so far! o __ o
more are coming

 


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