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Old 06-03-2007, 05:17 PM

Not sure what to title this but maybe you guys can help me with that.

A broken heart, shattered lives and shattered thoughts.
Broken and unbleeding searching for my salvation.
Hearing angels but seeing devils from the past.

Bone upon stone, blood in sweat working to my salvation.
How will I know it? Where could I find this place of rest?
Flesh returning to the earth a remembrance unkind.

Stone of granite, makes it permanent.
I wonder did he find his salvation?
Or was he mine?

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:23 PM

Thats awesome. ...now if I could only get you to write happy things too. xP

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:24 PM

What I learned in silence

I learned the trees speak and the wind can sing.
I learned every bird and brook has it's own song.
I learned the sun can smile.
I learned the the dew on the green grass speaks to the morning flowers.
but the most important thing I have learned was to listen.

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:25 PM

there happy Solin? XD

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:28 PM

o.o wow. That was fast.. and yes, very. Actually can I use part of it in my signature? I'll give you credit of course. ^^ <3

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:30 PM

if you want ^^ You know you don't have to ask me solin.

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:31 PM

I know but I wanted to anyway. It's your poetry and you should be proud and protective of it. -noddle-

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:31 PM

I suppose your right ^^ but thanks for coming here to talk and read my stuff.

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:36 PM

Anytime! You know that. ^^ ..You're gonna write more here, right?

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:40 PM

Maiden of Rose

Red are the roses that surround you in your castle so warm and bright.
Softer than snow your gentle skin glows from the soft candle light.
The nightingale gave her praise at every word you speak.
Hair softer the satin and brighter than oak.
Softly and gently does your smile show inviting the tired and weak to rest their head.

Maiden of Rose do you know who loves you?
My sweet maiden forsake me not and love me.
Maiden of Rose I shall love thee.

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:41 PM

yeah I just finished one lol I think you'll like it

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:45 PM

Awww~ Hallmark will definitively be harassing you to work for them. x3 I like it though it's very romantic sounding. ...Something I have quite a bit of trouble with. lol xD

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:46 PM

Oh sorry lol I got inspired to write something like it and well.... yeah you know me...

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:55 PM

lol Don't say sorry for writing awesome poetry! Being a creative writer is a talent and a gift. Just like any other area of art, writing is very important and I think probably the most difficult because it takes not only good writing skills but massive amounts of creativity and attention to detail and description. So don't ever, EVER be sorry for writing beautiful things like that! -huff- ..>>; -done ranting now- ^^;

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:58 PM

Gentle Lady of who is most fair weep not so.
Tears of these not meant to be shed.
Turn thy face to the sun warm light to dry thy tears and brighten thy smile.

Gentle Lady of who is most fair though thy husband gone and ye be weak and weary the sun and the stars shall smile on thee.

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Old 06-03-2007, 06:02 PM

lol Okay Solin I won't since you neearly bit my head off.

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Old 06-03-2007, 06:04 PM

-munches on the near piece of your head- xP

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Old 06-03-2007, 06:09 PM

If you are that Hungry I'll go make us something.

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Old 06-03-2007, 06:11 PM

okay I got to get off and do all the stuff I have to.. mainly feed the fish Solin and a few other things.. God I hate cleaning.

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Old 06-03-2007, 06:12 PM

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okay I got to get off and do all the stuff I have to.. mainly feed the fish Solin and a few other things.. God I hate cleaning.
:3 You know you like it~

 


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