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Old 06-07-2007, 09:25 PM


She's... an iPod >.>;

Does she even look like an iPod? Seriously?...

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Old 06-07-2007, 09:34 PM

heh she's an ipod alright :wink: i like her hair

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Old 06-07-2007, 09:41 PM

Oh what a lovely ipod girl! I especially like the detail on the visor, very clever. My only criticism is that some of your lines are a bit shaky on the cords. Some parts are overly big, and even though I know your trying to show the one is closer to the front, it looks a little strange. Overall though, awesome work. <3

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Old 06-07-2007, 09:50 PM

lol! Another item succumbs to the -tan craze. :)

Even so, it's an adorable concept. Pallas's remark on the visor is dead-on: it was indeed very clever. The coloring is good for original mac products (just though i should trhough that out) and she's a cute character concept all on her own.

About the 'overly large' usb plug...
it does look out of place :/ Use the thickness of the lines to exaggerate the perspective: the thicker the line, the closer it is to the viewer. That's a pretty good base to start with, I think. Plus lineart with varied size in lines often feels more...I don't know...warm and hand-rendered than the amazingly technical lines you have.
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But what you have here is very nice indeed!

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Old 06-07-2007, 10:21 PM

...ipod-tan. o_O her legs look kind of weird.

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Old 06-08-2007, 03:23 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by p a r f a i t
...ipod-tan. o_O her legs look kind of weird.
Mind elaborating?...

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Old 06-08-2007, 03:30 AM

Oh, I really like her emotion and the color scheme. Plus the movement in the piece is really nice too. Great job. To me it looks like an Ipod. :D

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Old 06-08-2007, 10:30 AM

In my opinion, her knees are kinda too.....chubby? =w=a;;; the one on our left is almost okay but I hope you see what I mean with the right knee. There should be a sudden slope inward where the knee joins with shin but since there isn't, the right legs unfortunately looks too big because normally people won't have meat around knee that much unless they're pretty chubby as mostly what's there are bones and tendons but not many big muscles.

The other problem is the foot on our left, I won't say the foot itself has a problem but more like how you positioned it; the foot is far too much turning to the left side while the whole legs seems turning to the right. Usually you can't bend your foot that far without turning the whole leg toward the same direction and not spraining the ankle ^^;;;

I like how you did the 'helmet' thing though....and as for the foreshortening on USB, maybe making the cable that's supposed to be at front overlapping the part that's behind might help.

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Old 06-08-2007, 02:21 PM

lol thats cool! and she is so cute ^_^

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Old 06-08-2007, 10:37 PM

I'd give it a 7/10......

Positive-
1. The visor is indeed clever! The detail on it is pretty good as well.
2. The coloring of the hair, skin, clothes, etc. is very nicely done. I can tell that you put a lot of time and work into making that look nice.
3. The anatomy is near perfect! wonderful [email protected]

Negative-
1. The lines are a bit shaky. I'm not sure if you have a graphic tablet, or just your mouse, but either way, If you want it to have a finished and polished look, you HAVE to very line thickness, and work on a steady hand.
2. I agree with all stated above, the cord should be thicker, not bigger. =]
3. The lines (again) need to be cleaned up. If you want that professional look, you have to go back and redo the cords! they're just too shaky to be believable.



In total, it looks wonderful. It just needs a bit more effort and it will be a masterpiece! :D

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Old 06-08-2007, 11:23 PM

awesome and yes! lol i have to admit that when i saw the word "Ipod" I immediately thought the face would be evil XD. *runs around "screaming Ipods will take over the world!"* lol

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Old 06-09-2007, 12:49 AM

I've always sucked at cords. It's not so much that the lines are shaky, but that they don't stay an even distance apart from each other. This is why I tend to not draw robot girls ^.^; I just drew this for a contest.

As for what I draw with, I have always used my mouse.

I always make my lines the same thickness. The whole different thickness lines thing (Though I do like the way it looks in most other people's drawings) never seems to work for me. I'm not sure why, but it never does.

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Old 06-09-2007, 01:09 AM

I remember this kid in my homeroom class kept calling me iPod girl >__>. It was annoying. He needed to learn my name or be quiet -.- . Sorry about going a little off subject D': . Anyways...
I think it's very pretty. She does look like a human iPod x]. I must say, it was probably a challenge to make someone look like an iPod but still a person. Very original and cute <333. I love it =3

EDIT: I love the colors. Very iPod-ish colors xD. And her hair is lovely, nice 8D

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Old 06-09-2007, 01:12 AM

Wow, very nicely done! Creative too! I like it.

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Old 06-09-2007, 01:26 AM

Lovelyl shadings. She does look like an i-pod actually xD, which is so cool. Her left leg seems a bit bent however. But it's still such a lovely piece @[email protected] You got all the details of the i-pod. Great job >w<

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Old 06-09-2007, 02:04 AM

Ah spiffy! She sorta does.

The helmet is not my thing though.
Perhaps... having a white and blue florescent screen? Or a menu item hilighted, like on an Ipod. The white is a little to homogenous.

But she's cute nonetheless.

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Old 06-10-2007, 04:50 PM

Awwwh ! That's absolutely adorable& awesomeee. :3~
I love your style. It's very unique. o_o

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#18
Old 06-10-2007, 05:29 PM

  • She makes me wish I had an Ipod. o__o;; Me-ow!

    I love her visor, very nice. n w n

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Old 06-10-2007, 06:38 PM

Super cute! I really like her hair, and the resemblance to an ipod is deffinatly notable. She has such a cute pose and I really like her experssion. Great Job!

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Old 06-10-2007, 07:25 PM

Igirl...

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Sounds like some new sex music doll that japan would make....

But its really cute! I love how you did the helmet.

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Old 06-10-2007, 07:51 PM

I like everything but the legs ^_^;;

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Old 06-10-2007, 08:11 PM

That's so adorable! <33 Great job on it. ^^

Maybe work on the fingers and legs a bit. =)

 


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