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Old 06-21-2007, 01:41 AM

Hello people! It seems that a lot of poems i read are always sad a full of pain. Is this all that inspires us to write? or is it just that we (the members of this forum) all share a common emotion? As for me, i tend to write more when i have lost something dear to my heart. During a time i felt i have lost all hope i wrote this poem.

Looking on ever so piercing gaze,
Eyes that stab through your soul.
Waiting in thee unseen,
still as statues lay
a hunger for souls that time will give
Each day once lived
passes on, but still he waits.
A cold air has passed,
eyes gaze down upon thy lifeless shell
sleep for eternity......
As worms feast on thy flesh he moves
creeping slowly toward thy resting place
he reaches out for you.
With your soul you must pay
for your life lived each day.......
now has ended.

It's not that great, but i feel it's the best i have made. I have been much more happy lately and i don't feel the need to write any poems. Has anyone else experienced this? Does anyone else have a explanation as to why it seems true if so?
Also to add, this may also be true in music. It seems more songs are written about lost loves, broken hearts and such. So to all of you, what inspires you in your writing?

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Old 06-28-2007, 02:02 AM


Hmm that's interesting. Nice poem. ^^

Well, most teenagers (the dominant population of this site) are a bunch of angst filled people under a lot of stress, so that's just the easiest thing to write about.

Or maybe just all the emo words sound better than the happy ones. lol
I dunno... darkness just attracts people.

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Old 07-01-2007, 06:14 PM

Well it could be that sadness sounds better. I mean, all of the poems and songs i like seem to be ones written in tears and blood. Though it seems that no one really knows. I have had this thread up and only one reply? Does anyone have any thoughts on this subject? If you are a poet, have you written any sad poems? Do you know why? These are some of the questions i'd like to know, to better understand people. Please post a response! ^^ thank you.

 


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