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Old 06-30-2007, 09:18 PM

I wrote this in math class at the end of the year. Our teacher had nothing to teach us in math so she told us to write poetry. xD

Mother Giraffe

Her neck was so long that it reached to the moon
Looking over the clouds that at night turn to blue
She could tell that the stars were happy to be there
And that her daughters and sons would never leave here

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Old 06-30-2007, 09:25 PM

  • Aw, it paints such a sweet image. ^^

    You should make it a bit longer though.

    Otherwise, it's cute. :)

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Old 06-30-2007, 09:27 PM

Thanks! :)
I probably will make a continuation. ^^

 


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