
10-06-2007, 04:42 PM
I know my poems arin't the best and are for the most part sad Free vears, but I still like to get feedback on them. : 3
Heart of Steel
By Hiei14
Hurt feelings locked in my heart,
His fingertips brushed at the real me.
I can't fly,
Because there is only burning.
Like sparks dancing bright blue,
I'm Shinning in this moment.
Stand tall,
My heart of steel.
Like a wild rose,
Blooming from all the lies.
With my unbrakable will,
One day I'll sore again.
Till then I'll be looking for the place,
Where winds of new begings blow.
Stand tall,
My heart of steel.
Rising from the ashes,
like the fabled birde of fire.
Alone I will walk,
Wishing for someone out there to find me.
Now the tears they like rain,
A river flowing ten fold.
With rust all around,
My heart of steel.
Sin Ribbons'
By: Hiei14
Crestline tears fall from her eyes,
Her Prayers fall on deaf ears.
With every passing moment,
She dies a little more inside.
He tryâs his best to hid the pain,
But his eyes wonât lie.
Her words wont come,
Desperation mounts.
Ribbons' of red fill her view,
Sorrow hangs on every tear.
He's every breath,
Is weaker then the last.
It's time for good-bye,
The sweetest of pains.
Surrendering love,
To the darkness of death.
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