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Old 10-09-2007, 03:07 AM


here goes. im comming up with this from my head

world spinnin dont know what to do
what evea hapened to just me and you
felt so secure with you in my arms.
would you come back if you knew you caused so much harm
think of you every second of the day
just hoping for you to pass by my way.
too bad looks like your gone never to return
guess my heart will have to stay here to burn
now gone nothing I can do
but sit here and think of you.

I made this in 10 minutes lol. is it good?

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Old 10-09-2007, 03:14 AM

  • Thats really good shaggy. shaggy has a soft side to him? xD

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Old 10-09-2007, 03:17 AM

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  • Thats really good shaggy. shaggy has a soft side to him? xD
lol duh .. I have to how else will I get all the girls lol. :lol:

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Old 10-09-2007, 03:43 AM

heres another one.

best of friends form the start.
said youd be there, wed never part
our feelings for each other grew
a love between us, a feeling so new.
Never felt this way before
never been though this door.
never thought we fall apart.
to bad I was the one who broke your heart.
I saw another girl and with her embarked
on a journy that would lead us apart
now the love has turned to hate.
because of her we had to sepperate.
my love for you will never end
too bad yours did from th messages you send
now yu dont pick up the phone.
now I fell all alone.
now you dont answer your calls
now I feel like im gonna fall
"I'll Always Love you is what you said."
I found out its not true and now theres a gun to my head.

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Old 10-10-2007, 02:32 AM


today I woke up on a sunny day.
the birds singing to me in the bed I lay
but then I remembered wat you used to say.
ill always be there for you.
my love for you will always be true.
to bad it was all a lie
thinking of you awways makes me cry.
but ima man now so cryig I cant do
so this just means I must forget about you
goodbye for eva ill see you never.
unless your love for me growns better

:lol:

 


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