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Old 10-10-2007, 12:56 AM

Anyway, here's three of my poems. Maybe I'll post some more later.

Drawing A Blank-I kind of like this, even though I wrote it with writers block. It's my most popular poem, but probably not the best. I don't like the end much either.
I’m drawing a blank
As to why you don’t care
Did I do something wrong?
Or was there just nothing there?
You can’t see
What I look like inside
But it’s you that I thought of
Every time that I cried
My body won’t let me
Feel any more pain
So the emotions I show
Are the ones that I feign
Because there is nothing
You didn’t destroy
My heart’s not a plaything
And it’s not a toy


one hundred word count-Me being somewhat emo. It's kind of about cutting, but that's how I roll. It's not very popular, but I do like it. It's one hundred words, if you were wondering.

looking at the scars decorating my wrists
i wonder what i did to you
god knows, i didn't hurt you, dear
or not the way you hurt me, too.

every time you take a step
my mind can't take you in
and every time you break my heart
a razor breaks my skin.

i guess you'll never comprehend
because you never read my poems
at least not knowing they're for you
and my newfound shattered home.

i'd rather be an empty frame
than a photograph slashed through
i wish you had the decency
to know that it was you.


Take What's Left-One of my older poems, not half bad. The reception was generally good.
you once called her beautiful
now all that's left is what her shell could protect
that faction of inner beauty
that fraction of herself
the part of her deaf to your lies
what she held on to
what you left

you tried to build her up
she tried too hard and fell
are you enough for both of you
or must you take what's left?
she's not broken, just ravaged
trying to piece together
what you didn't destroy

you left her there and you were replaced
you could have been her world
but you couldn't bear her burdens
were you that surpised?
you didn't want more pain inside
so you left her there
so someone else could take what was left

you once said "i love you"
now all that's left is what can't be erased
that faction of peace
that fraction of your love
the part of you that nobody saw
please don't hold on to her
so i can take what's left


That's all. Just comment and stuff.
And yes, these are on my devart, which is http://keepwishing.deviantart.com/

Thankies.

 


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