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Old 10-12-2007, 12:07 AM

Picture I did of an apple queen for a friend.
:3 I like how the background turned out even though it should be darker in places...
I'll be drawing an apple king soon. Huhuhu.

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Old 10-12-2007, 12:15 AM

Oh, I adore black and white art! Especially in styles like this. I can't do pen and ink/ hatching very well, so I really like these. I also like the little details you put in (even the mushrooms/toadstools on the grass). The one thing I would comment on is how the character should be appearing more prominently in the image. If you add an extra border or thicker lines around the character, it would pop out more from the background. Otherwise, I think it's a nice piece.

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Old 10-12-2007, 12:20 AM

I do to especially the ones that have to do with Halloween. Hence the name. Ha, but sadly I cna't draw for poop, so it's useless to me. =[

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Old 10-12-2007, 12:24 AM

its beautiful!
although I must admit the back hand seems a little out of place like her her isnt even there, also the sholders seem a little small and teh heaed seems to be too into the hat she its wearing (one with teh hat?)
the character also seems to blend too much with the background, making it contrast is a key *nods* sorry for teh critic but I hope it helps you in teh future ^_^ good luck!

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Old 10-12-2007, 12:27 AM

The scan kind of killed it when it came to contrasting dark lines. :(

As for the proportions, they're entirely stylistic. :P

 


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