Hello, I'm Sami, (that's pronounced Sam-eh!) and this is just a story I wrote...it's actually just a preview, please tell me it's faults and comment~


Elizabeth clung for dear life atop the steeple, overlooking a small village at the bottom of the cliff. "No...way!" Elizabeth almost yelled, and twisted her arms, getting a better grip on the crucifix. She peered through one eye, noting her surroundings. she could make out that she was very high up, but she didn't know by how much u ntil she opened her eyes fully. She screamed and slipped from the cross, her legs flailing underneath the platform where the crucifix stood.Elizabeth gasped and wrapped her fingers around the base of the crucifix, holding on for dear life and and sliding her legs across the walls of the steeple, looking for a ledge to stand on. She found a closed-off window, and pushed her feet sideways ontot the ledge underneath it. She steadied herself on the ledge and, swinging backwards, she grabbed hold of the latch on thw closed window, and pulled herself closer to the latch. She could hear the wind rushing by her face, but didn't dare open her eyes. she let one of her legs dangle free, and searched for another ledge, though she doubted she would be so lucky as to find another. Her foot rubbed againest something a brick, and she smiled to herself. She placed her foot on it, and swung herself down again, this time holding onto the window ledge she was just standing on.



okay I don't feel like writing anymore, so just comment and give me tips if possible.


-Sami

This should be posted in the writer's area...