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Old 10-13-2007, 05:42 AM

A few of my poems. let me know what you think!!!

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Candle

A candle light flickers,
and the wax over flows,
the light dims,
and it no longer glows.

The flame shouts,
it wants to burn,
but its full of doubt,
so all it does is yern.

The light slowly dims,
as the flame slowly drowns,
feeling all the sins,
hearing no more sounds.

This is my life,
something i can't handle,
feeling all this strife,
discribing it with this candle.
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Someone

Someone to love,
Someone to hate,
Someone we all,
can relate.

Someone we know,
Someone who cares,
Someone who's kind,
and would share.

Someone whos there,
thru thick and the thin,
till the end of time,
thru all thy sins.
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poem

life can be hard, i know it can
i learned the hard way, now i take a stand
pull this life together, piece by piece
i have my boyfriend, at least
life gets harder as time goes on
it falls apart and then its done
life can be hard i know it can
with all this stress, fatigue, and anxiety..
stay strong, keep going, live life, dont stop showing it
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dreams

dreams dissapoint,
and dreams die,
dreams arent real
dreams are just a lie,

my dreams have died,
my hopes are burried,
my soul feels empty,
my vision flurried,

my future does not exist,
my future doesnt matter,
my dreams are dead,
my dreams have shattered.

im letting go,
im giving up,
im slowing down,
and im growing up.
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Its funny, and im sorry.


Its funny how you break my heart
without even trying
its funny how you make me laugh
when we're both so far apart

its funny how your happy
while im still alone
its funny how you turned me down
so long ago

its funny how you knew me
without even knowing me
its funny how i loved you
while you never knew

its funny how you love her
and how i still love you
it breaks my heart everyday
knowing you had "him"

im sorry for my jealousy
im sorry for my poem
im sorry for my feelings
but i just keep holding on

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Old 10-13-2007, 05:52 AM


I think I like the candle one best.
Those are fairly pleasant! ^_^

oHsoDemandinG
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Old 10-15-2007, 10:22 PM

I like candle and someone the most but all your peoms are great.

 


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