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Old 10-13-2007, 06:00 PM

I would greatly appreciate it if people could help me come up with a name for this... and I would also like some opinions.

~*~*~*~*~*~
CHORUS (1)
God... God, listen to me cry
Please don't let my baby die
I need him and want him in my life
Please keep him with me
I did everything right
How can this be?

Felt so cold
As they pulled me to my room
Felt so bare
But wanted to see my baby there
Doctor told me
She couldn't see what she wanted
I heard the words,
But don't think I got it
Looking at the screen
I couldn't see a thing

CHORUS (1)

Doctor told me then
She couldn't find the heartbeat
And though I was 3 months along
He only lived to be 8 weeks
Broke down in tears
From losing what was once here
The child we formed lovingly
Was taken from us unknowingly
In God I started losing trust
All future plans now crushed

CHORUS (2)
God... God, why'd you let my son die
Don't you see the tears that I cry?
I needed him and wanted him with me
You took him anyway
I'd trade all my tomorrows
For one more yesterday
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Thank you!

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Old 10-13-2007, 06:21 PM

I don't understand why you copy and pasted that into this forum... I believe that is spam and you double posted which are both against the rules. Kindly delete them.

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Old 10-14-2007, 12:52 AM

Why not something simple like... My Baby or what his name should have been?

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Old 10-14-2007, 01:59 PM

I like "Distorted nightmare".

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Old 11-05-2007, 02:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Sickan-Chan
Why not something simple like... My Baby or what his name should have been?
I wrote another song and had decided to name it after him.

When I started recording it, I just quickly called it "My God" but I don't think it fits.

Any other suggestions?

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Old 11-06-2007, 02:59 AM


I agree about the name "My baby." or maybe "Mother's Nightmare"?

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Old 11-07-2007, 02:37 PM

OOooo... I really like "Mother's Nightmare"
I think that fits pretty well.

Thank you for suggesting it!

 


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