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i WAS BORED SO i MADE A STORiE Of HALLOWEEN :3

Prologue

Every 100 year , a young boy is chosen to defend Halloween from from the Jack o Lantern. 100 year has passed since the last time Jack o Lantern Came. Legend says that Jack would come each Halloween at Eight P.M.
to ruin Halloween.

In 2 Month , Jack will come to ruin Halloween. It will also be Huggles Birthday. Huggles has been chosen to protect this years Halloween. He will be a special boy , a boy with courage , dreams and potential.

Chapter 1

Huggles woke up on a Monday morning. He went to take a shower before going to school. After his shower he went to take a breakfast. He ate a toast with peanut butter jelly on it . He then grabbed his bag and went to school. On the way to school he saw a girl with a unique dress that he never met.Shewas going to the same direction as him , school. Huggles knew every students in his school.He thought that she was a transfered student so he just moved along . After a while he saw a house already with Halloween decoration. Halloween was 2 month away.

When he got to school , everyone looked at the girl weirdly. Huggles grabs his books and pen for the next classes . A few minutes after , the bell rang. Huggles was surprised that the girl was in his class. The teacher came and introduced the girl. He said her name was Flarise. After school , i went back to home . Flarise then came to me and said :
<< Come with me , i have something important to say >>.

eND OF cHAPTER 1

Kind of short don't you reckon??


But its alright 'part from that


And the fact that you used yourself to be the "hero"

You've got a decent idea there. The name Flarise is very inventive, butwould a person really name their child Huggles, is the question. Maybe explain why in the next chapter? Yes, also, I would expand the chapters a bit more.