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Old 10-20-2007, 02:33 AM

Post your wonderful poetry here! I've got two.

[untitled...think of one for me?]

I look at you
You look at her
I wave at you
You wave at here
Am I invisible?

You don't seem to notice
when I'm not by your side.
You don't seem to care,
if I'm there...
or not.

You notice when she's not there.
She's the one who makes you smile.
Makes you laugh.
Makes you cry.

She's the one
Who's similar to you.
Both good and evil
You match.

How about me?
I was in her place once.
Once.
A long time ago.
Am I so easily replaced?

What about me?
You cry for her
But...
When I'm gone.
Who will cry for me?

I'm sound so emo..>.<
Will post 2nd one later.^^
Opinions...? (I tried my best T_T)
Anybody...?

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Old 10-20-2007, 02:37 AM

There's a subforum for poetry, so I'll be moving this there. :3

Also, please check out the poetry subforum rules. ^^

 


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