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Old 10-21-2007, 05:52 AM



I love to write poetry, and I almost always make my poems into songs.....

Forgotten Love

I forgot about you,
Through my daily life I went.
A gaping hole in my heart,
Little did I know about.
My heart was pledged to you,
I could not stray away.
I forgot about you,
Until you called that day.
Since then I've been so happy,
Waiting for you to call back.
But you don't,
and I wait...
...and wait...
As I have always been waiting.
My heart IS pledged to YOU,
and I shall never stray away.



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Old 11-20-2007, 05:56 AM

My Straying Friend

We used to be best buddies,
The best you've ever seen.
But then you got all gloomy,
Evil looking, Mean.
We used to be best buddies,
The tightest all around,
But now all you ever do is
look at me and frown.
We used to be bets buddies,
Until you hooked up with him
He brought you to all those parties,
And paled out your skin.
We used to be best buddies,
An everywhere we went,
We laughed and giggled,
Cried and sighed,
But we were never spent.
As long as we had each other,
Happy we would be.
But he came along,
And tore us apart.
Friends, still are we?

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Old 12-23-2007, 08:29 AM

[size=18]Oh Brothers.[size]


What a big pain,
They drive me insane,
My brothers.
Younger than me,
They're troublesome see,
My brothers.
Making a mess,
Staining my dress,
My brothers.
The troublesome two,
As if their on cue,
My brothers.
Running around,
Make a horrid sound,
My brothers.
Both of them are,
Family by far,
My brothers,
And guess what?
I still love them.

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Old 12-24-2007, 05:49 PM

I love your poems. I totally agree with the big brothers one. Keep up the good work.

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Old 01-04-2008, 10:02 PM

Your poetry is wonderful. I'm sure a lot of people can relate. ^^

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Old 01-21-2008, 05:01 AM

thx =)


Creeping Distance


A few feet away, behind me,
A few feet away, right by me,

The foot steps,
A steady
thump,
thump,
thump,
In rythem with my heart.

The still night air,
A darkened street,

Relief flowing over,
My friends in front of me,

The foot steps,
Turn and run away.

A few feet away, behind me,
A few feet away, right by me,








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Old 01-21-2008, 05:05 AM


Fight


Screaming and yelling,
He just doesn't get it.
It was me who was wrong,
I just wont admit it.

He started this fight,
Me he called out.

Arousing my anger,
Bringing it about.

Storming about,
Walking around,
Shouting it out,
Yelling aloud.

Screaming and yelling,
He just doesn't get it.
It was me who was wrong,
I just wont admit it.


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Old 01-21-2008, 05:09 AM


Untitled


I have so much in my head right now,
Its hard to get it out.

Poems and poems just piled up,
Sonnets and limericks to be found.

I want to share them all with you,
Of all people you.

I want to spill them all upon a paper,
In beautiful ink to see.

Poems about everything,
Murder,
Love,
Questions,
Answers,
Life.

All this and more,
Poems and poems just piled up.

And I want to share them all with you,
Of all people you.


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Old 01-21-2008, 05:16 AM


I Tend to Repeat Repeat Myself


I tend to repeat myself,
'Tis true,
'Tis true,
'Tis true.

I tend to repeat myself,
I do it out of the blue.

At any given moment,
I do,
I do,
I do.

I tend to repeat myself,
And can't stop if I wanted to.

I'll burst out with a howdy ho,
And the rest just keeps on going,

No matter how I say it,
There is just no knowing.

Like if you start to hiccup,
And you find you just can't stop,
Stop.

And rhyming is a problem,
When a poet's words don't pop.

I tend to repeat myself,
Though it makes my poems dull.

I just can't stop repeating myself,
Repeating myself,
Repeating myself,
Myself,
me.

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Old 01-26-2008, 05:15 AM

Teachers

Teachers,
getting us ready for our future,a
we get mad,
cry,
yell,
laugh,
and have some of the happiest moments we could ever experience with our teachers. If anybody deserves to be recognized, it is our teachers. But no trophy or award could ever express our gratitude. The best gift that we could ever give our teachers
is to graduate and succeed in life. That's why they are here today and have dedicated their lives to teaching children who are special, smart, gifted, tall, thin and husky. That is exactly what a child is to a teacher, and that's why we can touch the sky, and when, God willing, we sometimes go beyond the moon.

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Old 02-16-2008, 06:43 AM

LOVE



Love,
A tricky fox,
Sly and smart.

Always getting to you,
Seldom letting you win.

Will I ever meet my sweetheart?


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Old 02-18-2008, 11:22 PM

A Quaint Quack



Walking right by the lake,
I sit down on the grass,
Right by the edge of the lake.

With me I have some bread,
Ravenous ducks gather all around,
Floating on the water like balloons in the sky.

I tear small chunks of bread,
Tossing them out to the ducks.

They reply their thanks,
A choir of quacks.

Among the quacks are chirps,
I look beyond most of the ducks,
My eyes beheld six ducklings.

Not afraid of humans yet,
Swimming fast to reach the bread,
Mother holding them back,
I watch as they ignore her,
They come to the shore,
So beautiful,
So cute,
And boy were they hungry,
They ate all my bread.

All the ducks left then,
Except for the ducklings,
Not until they heard an angry honk!

Then they left me too,
I watched as they left,
Playing in the water behind their mother,
Those ducklings.

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Old 02-18-2008, 11:24 PM

Wait


I've got school to attend,
Some Letters to send,
Breakfast to eat,
Memorizing my seat,
Playing in band,
Singing to no end,
Homework to do,
Meet those who are new.

Calm down,
Make me stop rushing,
No more rushing,
Please.

Let me breathe,
Wait and slow down,
No more rushing,
Please.

Allow me to live,
My life is mine,
I want it to be great,
Please.

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Old 02-18-2008, 11:25 PM

Fall


Fall, cool and sweet,
Children trick-or-treat,
Running all around,
Getting candy.

People all dressed up,
Everything is amuck,
Having so much fun,
With each other.

Before the night is through,
And the day becomes new,
Everyone goes home,
to their Family.

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Old 02-20-2008, 05:41 AM

Inferno Into My Heart



Taking me back into my heart,
to the day the fire started.

I was asleep in my room,
when all of a sudden
my mom was yelling at me.

Was I in trouble?
No, the house was on fire!

Everyone had to get out,
Immediately.

We all waited outside for
the firemen to arrive.

Fire danced on my house,
taunting us all,
saying that it would win.

I'd take in a breathe,
ashy and dirty,
the taste coated my tung.

When the fire had gone,
It had definitely won.

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Old 02-20-2008, 05:58 AM

The Treasure Within Books



A book is like a chest.
A treasure found within.
Every page is like a map,
just read your way through,
a story full of excitement.
At last you will find it,
the book's buried treasures,
all for you to enjoy.

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Old 02-20-2008, 06:21 AM

Musical Ability


As I practice my flute,
playing major scales and random bits of music,
my mind wanders back to my first lessons,
from my mom and dad.

Keep your embouchure relaxed,
don't let your jaw get tense,
breathe deep,
staccato, legato, tenuto,
be as musical as can be.

I do all these as I practice,
Fingers flying where as before,
I had to look up every other note.

I have advanced so much,
Top band at school,
all thanks to my first lessons,
from my parents.

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Old 02-20-2008, 07:02 AM

New Life


A cool breeze drifts through the air,
As I take my dog, Bandit, for a walk.
It is around noon when we arrive at the park,
we sit under a tree and relax.
Watching the leaves from the trees,
floating in the lake.

A few birds fly nearby,
and of course,
Bandit runs after them,
though he doesn't get far,
his leash is tied to the tree.

As we sit under that tree,
and continue to gaze at the lake,
we spot a rose bush,
just starting to bud.

New life at the beginning of spring,
a wonderful example,
of nature at its best.

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Old 03-14-2008, 04:58 PM

@ Demari:
you write such wonderful poetry!!
i don't really like all of the poems that i have to do in literature class, but i wouldn't mind trying to translate yours. (i probably won't do a good job though. i'm not very good at literature :oops: :oops: )

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Old 03-31-2008, 01:52 AM



@ white12lily
Thanks, all I do is write randomly though, whatever I feel. I should post a few of the ones on my computer.


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Old 04-02-2008, 08:48 PM

Your poems are wonderful! You have an excellent sense of rhythm and the poems portray the central ideas very well. They're also very easy to relate. Overall, excellent work.

However, I think that a couple of them would work better as pieces of prose rather that poems.

 


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