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Old 10-22-2007, 10:19 PM

I've decided to make this my poetry thread.

"Autumn"

The autumn comes.
The autumn goes.
The leaves fall down.
On the tip of my nose.

I relax in paradise.
This season of course.
I love this scenery
Before it all turns to ice.

The autumn comes.
The autumn goes.
The wind moves.
Before it snows.

I love the crunching.
Of the colorful leaves.
Oh please don’t end this.
I’d hate it for it to leave.

The autumn comes.
The autumn goes.
The leaves blown away.
Where did they go?

I’ll miss the colors.
I love the weather.
I spot a cardinal.
With a falling feather.

The autumn comes.
The autumn goes.
I can’t wait till next year.
I’ll be jumping on my toes.

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Old 10-22-2007, 10:21 PM

Thats a beautiful poem ... xD I wish I could write like that lol

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Old 10-22-2007, 10:53 PM

Thanks much! :]

You can. With your own style and ways.

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Old 10-22-2007, 11:22 PM

I am very bad at it .. maybe if I feel like it I will take on you adivce ^^

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Old 10-22-2007, 11:24 PM

:]

I'm pretty bad too. Things tumble in your head from time to time.

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Old 10-23-2007, 12:44 AM

Yep Yep I will agree with you there ^^

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Old 10-23-2007, 11:14 PM

"Simple Words About Life"

Time is precious to us all.
Starts with the sunrise.
Until we see the sun fall.
Time is ours, Time is pride.

People can rush around in circles.
People can walk bare footed
On the growing earthly soil
Slowly, and never forget it.

Life is ours for the taking.
But it is us what we are making.
Make intelligent choices.
So we can hear awe inspiring voices.

Take what is yours, and yours only.
Treasure your prizes, and don't regret.
Mistakes are Mistakes. Leave them lonely.
Mark my words, your life is something you won't forget.

 


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