See, I'm thinking about writing a collection of stories about a young boy named Rabi, he is very absurd and weird, so I hope you guys like it, and post any criticisms, ideas, opinions, anything.

-Wynna.

A Sedum Named Charlie

The slick oily grass let Rabis' feet become moist, as he trudged on towards school that day on a off-road path. The sun did not seem to shine that day, it doesn't seem to shine much on any day. Today was Wednesday. The day where the joys of the weekend are forgotten, and where the passing of the school work seems too far off to come.

Rabi was 17, well he was actually 16, but he felt more confident telling those around him that he was a year older. Rabi had a late birthday, it restricted him from driver's ed lessons, getting a part-time job, and even dating. Rabi usually spent his time either gardening, or writing short stories of those around him. Wondering what their lives must be like behind the built up facial mask of perfection that people displayed, much like a male peacock in heat.

Rabi was smart, he was smart enough to make honors the last three years. Rabi wanted to become a botanist, but he told those around him that he would rather become a nurse practitioner. He loved the feeling of dirt and much as he planted the marigolds into the make-shift garden behind the pool. Rabi loved gardening so much that his plants become people, and being people plants deserved names, especially the ones that Rabi did not know their flowering species.

Take Charlie for example; Charlie was Rabi's closest friend, his secret-bearer,his confidant. Charlie was placed in position of keeping Rabi's secrets safe, and forever hidden from prying eyes. Rabi would whisper into Charlie's ear while he watered the mulch around the plant's base. Rabi would lay in the garden hour after hour with the red chips sticking to his argyle sweater, and have the caterpillars climb up the knolls of his knuckles to fall back down. You see Rabi, didn't care how long he laid there in the garden, because you see Rabi loved Charlie even though he was simply a plant.

[sorry to cut it here I do have more]

Just watch your sentence structure, and edit it, and of course finish it. But it was really good, I wanted to read more...but there wasn't anymore to read.