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Old 11-08-2007, 07:29 PM

Okay these poems aren't like how I feel I just have freaky dreams and then write about them and apperntly what I write are poems so please don't make fun of me...well you can...I already do ^^ I'll try adding more as I...dream more

I have some favorites I'll post them first
Hope you like them

Leave me Hanging
By:chokolate(my nick name^^)
When I ask you to stay, You slink away. Saying There's too much work to be done. Never, though,
when I make your favorite dish, or a game is on.
I tried to tell you to stay, my biggest mistake.
I warned you he would run away, but no, not today,
there's too much work. Like always, you'll leave me hanging, and indeed he ran away, but not from home.
Now every time I see that room, the bed still made,
the clothes put away, I still think today, he did the right thing. He left himself hanging, before you could, and tonight I will do the same. I'll leave your favorite dish on the table, just made, right under the spot I'm peacefully swaying. The game will be on as you walk in, You will see me, then your favorite dish, and once again, you will leave me hanging.
-sigh- So sad -crying in the corner- lolz just kidding...drp ^^

The Path of Unforgotten Lies
By:Chokolate
Tall shady trees on either side, their branches like arms, their holes like eyes. All the creatures have their eyes set on this single sight; of a young girl,
walking on their path, on this night. Suddenly, a crack behind me, stands the beast of the night. It looks at me, and I look back in fright. It lunges forward, and I run the way I think is right. There,
in the distance, I see the lost soul of the forgotten night. I go to him, thinking he's nice, and ask him how to get out alive. He chuckles and says, “Oh dear child, you can't get out alive on this night alive,
you'll stay stay here with me, for eternity. I scream and run, in the distance I see the light of day. I run towards it only to see, it's not the sunlight,
it's a soul...of me.

Souls are lost all the time...but why in a forest? I guess the world will never know O.O

A Million Tiny Pieces
By:Chokolate
You hold my heart in your hands, just like you always have. You hold it so delicately, like a rose petal.
You insist you will somehow break it, I insist you can't. As you hold my heart more carefully than ever,
and as the blood gushes from your head, filling the street where the man who loves hate stands, gun in hand, you finally understand. I must be the angel,
the angel of death, and once your soul is lost,
my heart is shattered into a million tiny pieces.
Only to be healed by you, the one who may never be healed.

-sigh- So sad...death falls in love with the man she must kill, and the only mad she's not allowed to bring back...resulting in her becoming the cloaked evil skeliton with the seith that we all know too well...AND NO ONE EVER SAID DEATH IS A GUY SO SUSH!!

The Dark Abyss
By:Chokolate
The sky darkens, as we look over the horizon, we see it, and as the darkness comes, taking in everything in it's path, I know it's my time to go. To go into the dark abyss, forever falling.
This was like my first poem since like third grade and I'm not over estimating! Yes it's short, but it used to be shorter. Sense less, yes idiot, yes important no just want some more gold!

Walking in the Rain (This one is REALLY not personal I love life I'm not going to kill myself I wrote this for an emo friend of mine)
By:Chokolate
I love the rain it helps me think. It lets me cry. As I walk down the road, my tear stricken face disguised as rain, a train, a flash of pain, and finally eternal peace, as I float away on that rainy day.
This is quiet sad I thought about not making it up or atleast writing it down-or rather typing it- when I thought of it but then I did...

Ghost Stories
By:Chokolate
They creep, thay crawl, they scare, they ball, they run, they hiss, they swing and swish. They are the creatures of ghost stories, they make you shiver and hide, and when you dream you see them, and when you see them you cry. Once you think they are gone, you come out and look around, it seems there's none left, the BOO! HISS! GROWL! they come out. You run and run from them, but your never fast enough, and once you hide they find you, and once when you trip they get you. crawling, floating, prowling, gloating. They come and then start biting, you try to hide, they find you, and then you wake up screaming, to see you were only dreaming.
Or...were you?that's the question I leave YOU to decide, will you live or die?teehee

Heartless (This one is one of the only ones-maybe only-that is symbolic...kinda)
By:Chokolate
When you sleep they come, they follow the sound they hear. They come through you window and there it is. They hear your hear a' beating . They come on you and crawl to where it's loudest. They reach their little hands in you chest and take it out while your still a' sleeping. They do it right, and there's no bleeding. You're still alive, left there with that emptiness that can't be filled. You still wake up in the morning
You know it's lost forever, and you are suddenly the one who is heartless, never to use that word lightly again .
This is quite sad it's kinda symbolic I guess -coughgovernmeancoughishearlesscough-teehee

Nobody (I loved this one it's my weirdest yet!)
By:Chokolate
You walk on the street, your silent. You sit in class, your quiet. When you talk on the phone and someone asks who it is, you are nobody. Your not noticed at school. No one knows who you are, because you are nobody. At home your name is never called, you stay, silent to their ears, in your room or the basement. You don't eat much and you walk so softly it's like your not there. You only exist to yourself, you are nobody. You might as well be invisible, but you will be noticed when he dies. You will be hunted by ever watching eyes, though those eyes will not find, because you are nobody. They don't even have the slightest hint as to who it is, because you are nobody, and that's who killed him, nobody. They know, or think they know, it couldn't be the little silent girl, because that girl is nobody, and everybody knows nobody's like her only exist to be space fillers, and no more. They look at you confused when you confess, and you look right back with knowing eyes. You tell them every detail of his death, even though nothing had been released, and you have no connections, exept that you are the one who did it. It is then they know, you are a nobody, but only because you are not noticed. You are unnoticed enough that you can waltz right in to a house of an unknown owner, murder one of the two people in that house slowly and painfully, and still would you not be noticed by the other occupant of that house. That, and that alone, is why you are so silent all the time, only so you can kill unknown, and once you get bored of life, once you get bored of playing mind games with the police and FBI, even, you go to the police with you ever knowing eyes, to be put on death row, but never to die.
Ah this one is good! I LOVE weirdo's like this! And It's kinda like me(not the murdering part) because I'm pretty much unnoticed at school too!
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Old 11-08-2007, 07:37 PM

its so long but i have to read it because i like poems!! i see
u like poems to right? because ur poems is nice :)

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Old 11-08-2007, 08:10 PM

Thank you ^^ Yeah sorry they're so long And yeah I really really really really really LOVE poems hehe my favorite poem ever created(or read by me)is Bells by Edgar Allen Poe I've read that poem a million times!!^^

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Old 11-09-2007, 03:46 AM

Wow those are really good!
you should post them on deviantart!
I don't know if you meant them to be, but they're very symbolic!

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Old 11-09-2007, 06:20 AM

Thanks You!^-^(sorry for extra s's It's an unbelieveabbly hard habbit to break!) And I'm pretty sure I have The Path of Unforgotten Lies on deviart and i'm working on posting the rest...grr i have too many... :roll:

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Old 11-09-2007, 10:44 PM

Well post the rest poopy pants!
And check out my poem!
it's right under yours, i think...
it's called scape goat

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Old 11-10-2007, 03:23 AM

I can't post them because I don't have them saved on the computer yet and I'm too lazy I don't think I even have my binder with me with all of the rest in there and I saw yours I just didn't post yet I'll post in a minuet!

 


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