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Old 11-09-2007, 03:32 AM

Well, for some odd reason, this got a good reception at deviantart,
so i wanted to see what you guys thought of it... i might add more later.


Scape Goat



In a country like ours,
In a land far away,
Under different stars
But same in most ways

The elections were here
For their new president,
And all you could hear
Were speeches for the next "contestant"

The choices were two,
Mr. Smoe or S. Goat
And everyone knew
For whom they would vote

He saved us before
When the buildings came down
So let's have some more,
Who wants a new guy around

So S. Goat won
Although some wandered why,
Though, he was the son
Of some powerful guys

So everything was fine,
And the country was sound,
But someone was lying
Up in government town

The first time it happened,
They all looked away
While the Feds' camera's snappin'
Their everyday

Then once again
S. Goat messed up
Sending over our men
To innocents, just to stir up

Last time, count three
You'd think they'd have learned
He spent all their money
That the workers had earned

Now the country's in a heap
And their hero's a liar
But their in too deep
To get Scape Goat fired

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Old 11-09-2007, 03:34 AM


I wish i could ...

Don't bother with saying
i'm drowning
I'm already gone
The last bubbles have risen to the surface.
And although there might be
some air at the bottom
I don't wanna see it
or breathe it
Cuz that air isn't what i used to breathe
And I don't wanna change who i was going to be
At least if i die now i'll still be me.


Get it

Disatisfaction is always their reaction no matter my actions.
Everyday the same, no way to tame, everything just won't change .
We all need someone to blame, no one can handle their own shame.
I always get the fame as the one who always flames.
no one wants anything but their own side.
no one wants to admit all they do is hide.
The truth just cannot confide,
In their deadlocked biasedness inside.
No one wants to admit,
That we all just want to fit,
The perfect puzzle put in place,
By the programmed bigot idol race.
Hypocracy more fluent than democracy,
In our autacracy of idiocy.
We've lost all respect, and the world in effect,
Not knowing this affects all our earthly aspects.
The meaning of it all is just not to fall,
Which we do every day by our political walls.
All I'm saying is i'm not so mad,
Just to want waht we should have.
It may be all hopeless just for me,
Cuz right now it seems I'm the only one who sees.
Of course I know that's just my own despondency.
Nothing gets through, all the facts flown to you,
They shattered on the brink of a truth.
Truths are lies with no honest eyes.
While all the facts lie, for what you despise.
And all be defied, if that you don't like.
I just wonder why, we waste all this time,
When the truth just gets lost in the sea of the blind.

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Old 11-09-2007, 03:59 AM

Alright i doubt anyone will figure this one out xD

Dragonflies
I think it's the dragonflies that started it
Because i want to ignore the needles
They've been there much longer
And hurt a lot more
But I can't admit I don't know how to remove them.
Surprisingly it seems that the dragonflies never get stuck by the needles
But it only seems that way
And although there are many more needles
The dragonflies are worse
They have adopted all of the needle's traits
And are the epitome of the needle's faults
They know how to control the needles
So that they aren't in their way.
I hate to step on the needles
Because the dragonflies have to take them out
And when the needles come out they take some of my blood with them
The dragonflies don't know they've left a hole in my foot.
A lot of people have those holes
They never heal
But they don't like to tell that they are there
They're embarrassed
The dragonflies make it funny
And say it's because your foot hasn't healed right.
So they try to heal the holes
Without others knowing
But they don't try to move the needles.
They're too scarred
That they will step on more
And those holes hurt.
We've tried to trace those holes
And say it's to move and fix the needles
But we don't want to admit that we just like those designs they make
Maybe it's because the dragonflies hate them so much.
Sometimes the needles get dulled
And the dragonflies move them for us
But we don't know they were dulled
And we start to like the dragonflies.

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Old 11-10-2007, 03:36 AM

Yay This is really really good! Did you put it in your journal on Gaia? You should!

You have been not-so-randomly commented by the demented girl WOO!

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Old 11-10-2007, 04:05 AM

I like it.
I totally understand it too.
Which is really cool, cause normally I don't understand some poems...Like ones the rhyme for some reason...>.<

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Old 11-10-2007, 07:54 AM

lawl thanks for the comments!
it's deffinately one of my most straight-forward poems, lawlz!

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Old 11-18-2007, 12:01 PM

Your main/other account already has a poem thread.

Please use that one, instead of creating two threads.

http://www.menewsha.com/viewtopic.php?t=32170

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Old 11-20-2007, 02:46 AM

yay! thanks you for unlocking!

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Old 12-10-2007, 08:19 PM

*sorry for double posting*
But YAY! poetry forum unlocked!!
Why was it locked in the first place?

 


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