
11-10-2007, 06:05 PM
The first pic:
I didn't see much cause it's so bleary. >.< But I think the mini golden haired girl is cute. <3
What you did do are:
you need to shade more. It's good to have contrast in coloring and with color pencils try to color your drawings in solid color. It makes them really pretty.
What can I say about the mouse... well at least it's not that bad for one done in computer with a mouse and maybe paint?
But it's really not that good. There is not much shape if it's a mouse. Maybe try to look at pictures of mouses? It will help with the anatomy. Cause the one you are doing right now. If not for what you wrote, I wouldn't have know what it was.
Sorry if my words sound harsh. >.<
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